User contributions for 5ive9teen
A user with 1,691 edits. Account created on 4 November 2021.
30 April 2024
- 23:2523:25, 30 April 2024 diff hist −6 Talk:Streisand effect →The lead
- 23:2423:24, 30 April 2024 diff hist −5 Streisand effect new sentence Tag: Visual edit
- 23:2223:22, 30 April 2024 diff hist −12 Streisand effect fix Tag: Visual edit
- 23:2123:21, 30 April 2024 diff hist +15 Streisand effect backfires was a little bit of an orphan Tag: Visual edit
- 23:1823:18, 30 April 2024 diff hist +1 Streisand effect comma Tag: Visual edit
- 23:1523:15, 30 April 2024 diff hist −2 Talk:Streisand effect →The lead
- 23:1323:13, 30 April 2024 diff hist +2 Streisand effect fix Up Tag: Visual edit
- 23:1323:13, 30 April 2024 diff hist −4 Streisand effect One word for two Tag: Visual edit
- 23:0923:09, 30 April 2024 diff hist +14 Talk:Streisand effect →The lead
- 23:0823:08, 30 April 2024 diff hist +13 Streisand effect copy Tag: Visual edit
- 23:0223:02, 30 April 2024 diff hist −1 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 23:0023:00, 30 April 2024 diff hist −6 Shōgun (novel) a semi colon is more appropriate for this incomplete clause since it implies—as if a function of semicolons—“and”. In case spelling out “and”would be inelegant, and a comma insufficient Tag: Undo
- 22:5522:55, 30 April 2024 diff hist −5 Streisand effect copy Tag: Visual edit
- 22:5422:54, 30 April 2024 diff hist −2 Streisand effect more suitable article Tag: Visual edit
- 22:5122:51, 30 April 2024 diff hist +433 User talk:Anachronist →Hello: new section Tag: New topic
- 22:4722:47, 30 April 2024 diff hist +1,224 Talk:Streisand effect →The lead: new section Tag: New topic
- 22:3722:37, 30 April 2024 diff hist −263 Streisand effect Editor apparently is unaware reverted that lead was done without seeking consensus. Anarchist is encouraged to discuss their lead, which has much to recommend Tag: Undo
- 22:1822:18, 30 April 2024 diff hist +26 Streisand effect copy Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 22:1322:13, 30 April 2024 diff hist +617 Talk:Streisand effect →New version of the lead section: Reply Tag: Reply
- 22:0822:08, 30 April 2024 diff hist −516 Streisand effect Revert The lead did not have idiomatic expressions. Please discuss rather than do a second revert Tag: Reverted
- 22:0522:05, 30 April 2024 diff hist +172 Talk:Streisand effect →New version of the lead section: Reply Tag: Reply
- 22:0422:04, 30 April 2024 diff hist +224 Streisand effect This is suitable for the lead because the Streisand effect is now a disparagement, and unfortunately of her. Whether that is unfair or not, is not address. That is better left to the body Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 21:4821:48, 30 April 2024 diff hist +6 Streisand effect style Tag: Visual edit
- 21:4721:47, 30 April 2024 diff hist +170 Talk:Streisand effect →New version of the lead section: Reply Tag: Reply
- 21:4621:46, 30 April 2024 diff hist +8 Streisand effect Copy Tag: Visual edit
- 21:4521:45, 30 April 2024 diff hist +1,277 Streisand effect The editors good edit attempt to shortened even further suggested this even more to the point lead Tag: Visual edit
- 20:5920:59, 30 April 2024 diff hist −7 Streisand effect trim Tag: Visual edit
- 20:5920:59, 30 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Streisand effect sp Tag: Visual edit
- 20:5820:58, 30 April 2024 diff hist +4 Streisand effect Copy Tag: Visual edit
- 20:5720:57, 30 April 2024 diff hist +74 Talk:Streisand effect →New version of the lead section
- 20:5620:56, 30 April 2024 diff hist +1 Streisand effect copy Tag: Visual edit
- 20:5220:52, 30 April 2024 diff hist +44 Streisand effect an essential distinction Tag: Visual edit
- 20:4920:49, 30 April 2024 diff hist −5 Streisand effect not needed Tag: Visual edit
- 20:4820:48, 30 April 2024 diff hist 0 Streisand effect copy Tag: Visual edit
- 20:4520:45, 30 April 2024 diff hist +170 Talk:Streisand effect →New version of the lead section: Reply Tag: Reply
- 20:4320:43, 30 April 2024 diff hist −1 Streisand effect semicolon Tag: Visual edit
- 20:4220:42, 30 April 2024 diff hist −15 Streisand effect propagate is exactly what happens and a fine word for the lead Tag: Visual edit
- 20:4020:40, 30 April 2024 diff hist +3 Streisand effect If objected to, time to have a discussion Tag: Visual edit
- 20:3820:38, 30 April 2024 diff hist −8 m Streisand effect sp Tag: Visual edit
- 20:3820:38, 30 April 2024 diff hist −930 Streisand effect Valid point about TMI addressed Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
- 20:3720:37, 30 April 2024 diff hist −51 Streisand effect Undid revision 1221590157 by Ianmacm (talk) the 3rd revert will be edit warring Tag: Undo
- 20:2320:23, 30 April 2024 diff hist −51 Streisand effect Undid revision 1221528311 by Ianmacm (talk) revert lengthened the lead Tags: Undo Reverted
- 16:5716:57, 30 April 2024 diff hist −19 Shōgun (novel) trim Tag: Visual edit
- 16:5316:53, 30 April 2024 diff hist −1 Shōgun (novel) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 16:5316:53, 30 April 2024 diff hist 0 Shōgun (novel) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 16:4416:44, 30 April 2024 diff hist +5 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 16:4216:42, 30 April 2024 diff hist +8 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: copy Tag: Visual edit
- 16:3416:34, 30 April 2024 diff hist −1 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 16:3116:31, 30 April 2024 diff hist −1 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: rm comma Tag: Visual edit
- 16:3016:30, 30 April 2024 diff hist −2 m Shōgun (novel) →Plot Tag: Visual edit
- 16:2916:29, 30 April 2024 diff hist +4 m Shōgun (novel) →Plot Tag: Visual edit
- 16:2816:28, 30 April 2024 diff hist −3 Shōgun (novel) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 16:2216:22, 30 April 2024 diff hist −4 m Shōgun (novel) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 16:2216:22, 30 April 2024 diff hist −8 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 16:2116:21, 30 April 2024 diff hist −6 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 15:0115:01, 30 April 2024 diff hist +1 Shōgun (novel) sp Tag: Visual edit
- 15:0015:00, 30 April 2024 diff hist −60 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 14:4014:40, 30 April 2024 diff hist −22 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 14:3514:35, 30 April 2024 diff hist +1 Shōgun (novel) pilots are part of the crew Tag: Visual edit
- 14:3414:34, 30 April 2024 diff hist +5 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: WP link for Izu Tag: Visual edit
- 14:3014:30, 30 April 2024 diff hist −14 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: trim Tag: Visual edit
- 14:2814:28, 30 April 2024 diff hist −14 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 14:1214:12, 30 April 2024 diff hist +19 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: copy Tag: Visual edit
- 14:0014:00, 30 April 2024 diff hist +30 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 07:1107:11, 30 April 2024 diff hist 0 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: copy Tag: Visual edit
- 07:0707:07, 30 April 2024 diff hist +8 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: copy Tag: Visual edit
- 06:5906:59, 30 April 2024 diff hist −21 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: copy Tag: Visual edit
- 03:4003:40, 30 April 2024 diff hist +1 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead
- 03:3803:38, 30 April 2024 diff hist +22 Alcoholics Anonymous Clarification Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3503:35, 30 April 2024 diff hist +5 Alcoholics Anonymous copy Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3403:34, 30 April 2024 diff hist +63 Alcoholics Anonymous it’s a nuance suitable for the lead Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3103:31, 30 April 2024 diff hist +1 Alcoholics Anonymous copy Tag: Visual edit
- 03:2903:29, 30 April 2024 diff hist 0 Alcoholics Anonymous copy Tag: Visual edit
- 03:2403:24, 30 April 2024 diff hist −8 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead
- 03:2003:20, 30 April 2024 diff hist +228 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead
- 03:1803:18, 30 April 2024 diff hist +168 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 03:1603:16, 30 April 2024 diff hist +3 Shōgun (novel) permit is the more appropriate, a permit to leave harbor is what is not signed, not an allowance Tag: Visual edit
- 03:1203:12, 30 April 2024 diff hist −160 Shōgun (novel) copy concision Tag: Visual edit
- 02:5502:55, 30 April 2024 diff hist −1 Shōgun (novel) rm comma Tag: Visual edit
- 02:5202:52, 30 April 2024 diff hist 0 Shōgun (novel) Undid revision 1221371424 by 2601:380:8284:3970:E532:3944:8C5A:5B56 (talk) affecting means evoking a strong emotional response Tag: Undo
- 02:4702:47, 30 April 2024 diff hist +139 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 02:4602:46, 30 April 2024 diff hist +138 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead: Reply Tag: Reply
29 April 2024
- 22:4822:48, 29 April 2024 diff hist +3 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead
- 22:4822:48, 29 April 2024 diff hist +170 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 17:4217:42, 29 April 2024 diff hist +29 Streisand effect copy Tag: Visual edit
- 17:4017:40, 29 April 2024 diff hist −11 Streisand effect copy Tag: Visual edit
- 17:3717:37, 29 April 2024 diff hist −1 Streisand effect copy Tag: Visual edit
- 17:3617:36, 29 April 2024 diff hist +1 Streisand effect fix Tag: Visual edit
- 17:3517:35, 29 April 2024 diff hist +6 Streisand effect clarification Tag: Visual edit
- 17:3417:34, 29 April 2024 diff hist +174 Streisand effect facts corrected Tag: Visual edit
- 17:2117:21, 29 April 2024 diff hist +9 Streisand effect more specific Tag: Visual edit
- 16:2416:24, 29 April 2024 diff hist +115 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 16:2216:22, 29 April 2024 diff hist −9 Streisand effect →Rebuttal by Barbra Streisand: fix Tag: Visual edit
- 16:2116:21, 29 April 2024 diff hist −64 Streisand effect →Rebuttal by Barbra Streisand: rm redundant copy restating, and nothin else, the substance of the quote Tag: Visual edit
- 16:1716:17, 29 April 2024 diff hist −6 Streisand effect copy Tag: Visual edit
- 16:1616:16, 29 April 2024 diff hist −225 Streisand effect The too long lead had too much information better suited for the body, e.g. the meme resulting in file sharing and mocking songs, The 1st paragraph is thematically united to the term and the term itself. The 2nd graph includes a more concise and accurate (no one, afaik, has disputed Steisand’s account) of the effect’s origins, The 3rd graph briefly covers how the term’s common usage. Tag: Visual edit
28 April 2024
- 19:4319:43, 28 April 2024 diff hist +120 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 19:2519:25, 28 April 2024 diff hist −40 Shōgun (novel) slight change to good and helpful edit. The ship destruction implicitly and explicitly is already related, albeit now corrected to burned. Tag: Visual edit
- 06:0806:08, 28 April 2024 diff hist +6 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 06:0406:04, 28 April 2024 diff hist +1 Shōgun (novel) comma Tag: Visual edit
- 06:0206:02, 28 April 2024 diff hist +3 Shōgun (novel) possessive Tag: Visual edit
- 06:0106:01, 28 April 2024 diff hist −3 Shōgun (novel) fix Tag: Visual edit
- 06:0106:01, 28 April 2024 diff hist +1 Shōgun (novel) Toranaga’s soliloquy is given after he is shogunate, thus making it part of the novels premise, not outside of it Tag: Visual edit
- 05:5105:51, 28 April 2024 diff hist −374 Shōgun (novel) Concision and copy Tag: Visual edit
- 05:0205:02, 28 April 2024 diff hist −2 Shōgun (novel) oops Tag: Visual edit
- 05:0105:01, 28 April 2024 diff hist −23 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
27 April 2024
- 22:4622:46, 27 April 2024 diff hist −5 Shōgun (novel) fix Tag: Visual edit
- 22:4522:45, 27 April 2024 diff hist −6 Shōgun (novel) redundant Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3922:39, 27 April 2024 diff hist −36 Shōgun (novel) copy. A comma for a sentence starting with In 1980 is never needed except to prevent confusion Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3522:35, 27 April 2024 diff hist −198 Shōgun (novel) more of the same Tag: Visual edit
- 22:1922:19, 27 April 2024 diff hist +4 Shōgun (novel) article Tag: Visual edit
- 22:1722:17, 27 April 2024 diff hist −7 Shōgun (novel) Fix Tag: Visual edit
- 22:1522:15, 27 April 2024 diff hist −456 Shōgun (novel) redactions and concision in favor of that which is more essential Tag: Visual edit
- 21:2521:25, 27 April 2024 diff hist −128 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: trimming incidental figures and details Tag: Visual edit
- 21:1321:13, 27 April 2024 diff hist −20 Shōgun (novel) trim Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0720:07, 27 April 2024 diff hist +122 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead: Reply Tag: Reply
- 20:0520:05, 27 April 2024 diff hist +260 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead: sure
- 19:4419:44, 27 April 2024 diff hist +394 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead
- 19:3219:32, 27 April 2024 diff hist +23 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead
- 19:3119:31, 27 April 2024 diff hist +19 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead
- 19:3019:30, 27 April 2024 diff hist +225 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead
- 19:2619:26, 27 April 2024 diff hist +31 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead
- 19:2419:24, 27 April 2024 diff hist −636 Keith Richards Undid revision 1221080361 by FlightTime (talk) This is my 2nd revert of the day. Flight Times next revert will be their 3rd and be edit warring. The editor has been cordially invited to discuss the edits, but is apparently refusing. This unfortunate and hopefully is not a retained inclination to not discuss Tags: Undo Reverted
- 19:2019:20, 27 April 2024 diff hist −1,570 User talk:5ive9teen →April 2024: acting in return ] exactly as the editor does on their talk page regarding messages Tag: Manual revert
- 19:1919:19, 27 April 2024 diff hist 0 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead
- 19:1919:19, 27 April 2024 diff hist −32 Talk:Keith Richards →Keith Richards lead revert
- 19:1819:18, 27 April 2024 diff hist +3 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead
- 19:1719:17, 27 April 2024 diff hist +845 Talk:Keith Richards →Avoiding an edit war over the lead: new section Tag: New topic
- 19:1119:11, 27 April 2024 diff hist −636 Keith Richards Undid revision 1221079213 by Tkbrett (talk) Your next edit will be your third and qualify as edit warring. Please explain your so far unknown reasons for reverts. Tags: Undo Reverted
- 19:0819:08, 27 April 2024 diff hist +611 User talk:FlightTime →Keith Richards lead revert: new section Tags: Reverted New topic
- 19:0119:01, 27 April 2024 diff hist −636 Keith Richards Undid revision 1221078365 by FlightTime (talk) Unexplained revert undone, will, evert again, but suggest discussing what is objectionable on talk to prevent Dede descending into an edit war Tags: Undo Reverted
- 18:5618:56, 27 April 2024 diff hist −2 Keith Richards fix Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:5418:54, 27 April 2024 diff hist +4 Keith Richards copy Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:5218:52, 27 April 2024 diff hist +16 Keith Richards preposition Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:5018:50, 27 April 2024 diff hist +7 Keith Richards missing word Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:4918:49, 27 April 2024 diff hist +3 Keith Richards copy Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:4718:47, 27 April 2024 diff hist −10 Keith Richards npov Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:4618:46, 27 April 2024 diff hist −1,267 Keith Richards the previous lead delved into details too granulated to a lead, e.g. his grammar school and what songs he sang lead on live. The same goes for the best list he has consistently appeared on. There are many and listing of those are for body Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:1718:17, 27 April 2024 diff hist +5 Keith Richards No edit summary Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:1618:16, 27 April 2024 diff hist −3 Keith Richards Typo Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:1518:15, 27 April 2024 diff hist +186 Keith Richards added songwriting achievements Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:0718:07, 27 April 2024 diff hist +425 Keith Richards rewrite of lead with npov Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 17:1217:12, 27 April 2024 diff hist 0 Shōgun (novel) Premise now refers more to the novel’s analogues and less to actual events Tag: Visual edit
- 17:1117:11, 27 April 2024 diff hist +52 Shōgun (novel) No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 16:5416:54, 27 April 2024 diff hist −1 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3103:31, 27 April 2024 diff hist +5 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 03:2903:29, 27 April 2024 diff hist −210 Shōgun (novel) Shortened to uses historical timeline the book adhere to and is based on Tag: Visual edit
26 April 2024
- 17:1517:15, 26 April 2024 diff hist +292 Talk:Shōgun (novel) →Premise: Reply Tag: Reply
- 17:1217:12, 26 April 2024 diff hist −28 Shōgun (novel) valid point Tag: Visual edit
- 16:1116:11, 26 April 2024 diff hist +32 Talk:Shōgun (novel) →Premise
- 16:1016:10, 26 April 2024 diff hist +228 Talk:Shōgun (novel) →Premise: Reply Tag: Reply
- 15:5315:53, 26 April 2024 diff hist +265 Talk:Shōgun (novel) →Premise: Reply Tag: Reply
- 05:0405:04, 26 April 2024 diff hist −336 Shōgun (novel) There’s a lot of interesting details that aren’t that necessary for a plot summary Tag: Visual edit
- 04:5804:58, 26 April 2024 diff hist −83 Shōgun (novel) Cleared up copy in which you couldn’t tell who did what Tag: Visual edit
- 04:4704:47, 26 April 2024 diff hist +21 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: important to add Tag: Visual edit
- 02:1402:14, 26 April 2024 diff hist +32 Talk:Shōgun (novel) No edit summary
- 02:1102:11, 26 April 2024 diff hist −2 Shōgun (novel) Trim Tag: Visual edit
- 01:5301:53, 26 April 2024 diff hist +4 Shōgun (novel) Missing article Tag: Visual edit
- 01:5201:52, 26 April 2024 diff hist −368 Shōgun (novel) This stays within the timeframe of the book Tag: Visual edit
- 01:1001:10, 26 April 2024 diff hist −16 Talk:Shōgun (novel) No edit summary
- 00:1900:19, 26 April 2024 diff hist +10 Talk:Shōgun (novel) No edit summary
- 00:1600:16, 26 April 2024 diff hist +167 Talk:Shōgun (novel) →Premise: Reply Tag: Reply
25 April 2024
- 23:2923:29, 25 April 2024 diff hist +60 Talk:Shōgun (novel) No edit summary
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- 23:0623:06, 25 April 2024 diff hist +5 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 23:0523:05, 25 April 2024 diff hist +18 Shōgun (novel) more precise Tag: Visual edit
- 23:0423:04, 25 April 2024 diff hist +2 Shōgun (novel) devided and force remover per objection Tag: Visual edit
- 22:5722:57, 25 April 2024 diff hist +14 Shōgun (novel) Copy Tag: Visual edit
- 22:5622:56, 25 April 2024 diff hist −98 Shōgun (novel) redundant and tmi Tag: Visual edit
- 22:5322:53, 25 April 2024 diff hist −13 Talk:Shōgun (novel) No edit summary
- 22:5122:51, 25 April 2024 diff hist +39 Talk:Shōgun (novel) →Premise
- 22:4322:43, 25 April 2024 diff hist −9 Shōgun (novel) →Historic Premise: redundant Tag: Visual edit
- 22:4222:42, 25 April 2024 diff hist +4 Shōgun (novel) Fix Tag: Visual edit
- 22:4122:41, 25 April 2024 diff hist −10 Shōgun (novel) Fix Tag: Visual edit
- 21:5821:58, 25 April 2024 diff hist +29 Talk:Shōgun (novel) No edit summary
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- 21:5421:54, 25 April 2024 diff hist −1 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 21:5121:51, 25 April 2024 diff hist −6 Shōgun (novel) unbolded Tag: Visual edit: Switched
- 21:4821:48, 25 April 2024 diff hist +1,869 Talk:Shōgun (novel) →Premise: Reply Tag: Reply
- 20:5620:56, 25 April 2024 diff hist +246 Shōgun (novel) You could argue, which I don’t in the article, that the Shogunate’s long lasting and united rule made it possible for Japan respond to Perry’s arrival appeared in the following Meiji period so Japan could catch with the west and be able to defend otwlef, and even deal the first great miltary loss of a European country, Russia, to non Whites since the Moors invaded Spain. Hence this brief addition of context is relevant to the boos, which covers the most consequential 3 years for Japan ever Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2520:25, 25 April 2024 diff hist −5 Shōgun (novel) Copy Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2420:24, 25 April 2024 diff hist +84 Shōgun (novel) 1st, welcome to the editors recently joining in. With one change, besides copy edits, of adding Japans subsequent isolationism very much a result of many historical events Shōgun narrates, this is a suggested edit that has been proposed and explained for 4 days on talk page, Giving an edit protection cuz edit war, please discuss anything substantial edits there before editing Tag: Visual edit
22 April 2024
- 06:4806:48, 22 April 2024 diff hist +6 Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
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- 06:3406:34, 22 April 2024 diff hist +2 Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
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- 06:1306:13, 22 April 2024 diff hist +49 Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 06:0706:07, 22 April 2024 diff hist +4 Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 06:0506:05, 22 April 2024 diff hist −1 Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 06:0406:04, 22 April 2024 diff hist +327 Pablo Picasso Added his escape from high society to Bohemia Tag: Visual edit
- 05:3605:36, 22 April 2024 diff hist −1 Pablo Picasso Sp Tag: Visual edit
- 05:3505:35, 22 April 2024 diff hist +12 Pablo Picasso fix Tag: Visual edit
- 05:3305:33, 22 April 2024 diff hist +100 Pablo Picasso additional importance of Cubism stated Tag: Visual edit
- 05:2205:22, 22 April 2024 diff hist +69 Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 05:0305:03, 22 April 2024 diff hist +147 Pablo Picasso Had to have at least one cubist painting but got a two fer Tag: Visual edit
- 04:5004:50, 22 April 2024 diff hist +31 Pablo Picasso qualifications Tag: Visual edit
- 04:4804:48, 22 April 2024 diff hist +49 Pablo Picasso More on Bracque Tag: Visual edit
- 04:4304:43, 22 April 2024 diff hist +3 m Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 04:4004:40, 22 April 2024 diff hist +19 Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 04:3204:32, 22 April 2024 diff hist +168 Pablo Picasso a little more on the last works Tag: Visual edit
- 04:1804:18, 22 April 2024 diff hist −1 Pablo Picasso Better word Tag: Visual edit
- 04:1504:15, 22 April 2024 diff hist +11 Pablo Picasso fixes Tag: Visual edit
- 04:1204:12, 22 April 2024 diff hist +5 Pablo Picasso Better word Tag: Visual edit
- 04:0804:08, 22 April 2024 diff hist +5 Pablo Picasso qualifier Tag: Visual edit
- 04:0504:05, 22 April 2024 diff hist +192 Pablo Picasso Key distinction between Bracque and Picasso Tag: Visual edit
- 03:5603:56, 22 April 2024 diff hist −1 Pablo Picasso They did the conflating Tag: Visual edit
- 03:5403:54, 22 April 2024 diff hist +11 Pablo Picasso cuz Ceaanne Tag: Visual edit
- 03:5303:53, 22 April 2024 diff hist +6 Pablo Picasso hard to mis amd max genres Tag: Visual edit
- 03:5003:50, 22 April 2024 diff hist −14 Pablo Picasso eh, a little overboard Tag: Visual edit
- 03:4803:48, 22 April 2024 diff hist +39 Pablo Picasso copy Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3803:38, 22 April 2024 diff hist −3 Talk:Shōgun (novel) →Premise
- 03:3603:36, 22 April 2024 diff hist +3 Pablo Picasso missing word Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3603:36, 22 April 2024 diff hist 0 Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3403:34, 22 April 2024 diff hist +28 Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3303:33, 22 April 2024 diff hist +2 Pablo Picasso paragraph Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3103:31, 22 April 2024 diff hist +118 Pablo Picasso added late self portrait Tag: Visual edit
- 03:2403:24, 22 April 2024 diff hist +17 m Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 03:2003:20, 22 April 2024 diff hist −10 m Pablo Picasso trim Tag: Visual edit
- 03:1803:18, 22 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Pablo Picasso Sp Tag: Visual edit
- 03:1703:17, 22 April 2024 diff hist −20 Pablo Picasso redundant Tag: Visual edit
- 03:1603:16, 22 April 2024 diff hist −2 m Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 03:1503:15, 22 April 2024 diff hist +85 Pablo Picasso added then three Women at the fountain Tag: Visual edit
- 03:0703:07, 22 April 2024 diff hist +11 Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 03:0603:06, 22 April 2024 diff hist +120 Pablo Picasso copy Tag: Visual edit
- 02:5402:54, 22 April 2024 diff hist +18 Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
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- 02:5302:53, 22 April 2024 diff hist +5 Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 02:5102:51, 22 April 2024 diff hist +19 Pablo Picasso cleanup Tag: Visual edit
- 02:4902:49, 22 April 2024 diff hist +97 Pablo Picasso copy cleanup Tag: Visual edit
- 02:3002:30, 22 April 2024 diff hist +521 Pablo Picasso Copy, summarizing nites on importance and lasting effect Tag: Visual edit
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- 01:0101:01, 22 April 2024 diff hist +134 Pablo Picasso added Guitar 1912 to the list Tag: Visual edit
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- 00:4000:40, 22 April 2024 diff hist −50 Pablo Picasso Copy edits, Spanish idioms regarding given and taken surnames now in the lead
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21 April 2024
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- 22:4722:47, 21 April 2024 diff hist +5 Pablo Picasso Copy edits, cleanups and added his major homages to old masters. Again, very much welcome comments on these. Some of which duplicate text from an earlier version, which I will attempt to address shortly Tag: Visual edit
- 22:4422:44, 21 April 2024 diff hist +902 Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
- 21:1321:13, 21 April 2024 diff hist +8 Pablo Picasso Added his full—very long—name. Added biograpical info Thematically split paragraphs. Clarified Cubism, as best can be done in very few word. Updated short list of important works. Will add later epic series: Las Menias, Women of Algeria, Picnic on the Grass, Rape of the Sabine. Happy to discuss edits per WP norms Tag: Visual edit
- 21:0721:07, 21 April 2024 diff hist +262 Pablo Picasso No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
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- 07:5407:54, 20 April 2024 diff hist −2 Talk:Shōgun (novel) →The lead: oops
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- 05:3005:30, 20 April 2024 diff hist +168 User talk:Sergecross73 →5ive9teen and Shōgun: Reply Tag: Reply
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- 05:2705:27, 20 April 2024 diff hist −1 Shōgun (novel) Rm comma Tag: Visual edit
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- 03:1103:11, 20 April 2024 diff hist +12 Shōgun (novel) →Premise: key fact Tag: Visual edit
- 03:0703:07, 20 April 2024 diff hist +4 Shōgun (novel) →Premise: more fluid of a verb Tag: Visual edit
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- 03:0103:01, 20 April 2024 diff hist −134 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: extranea removed Tag: Visual edit
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- 02:2202:22, 20 April 2024 diff hist +8 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: named needed Tag: Visual edit
- 02:2002:20, 20 April 2024 diff hist +4 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: added conjunction Tag: Visual edit
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- 02:1702:17, 20 April 2024 diff hist +1 Shōgun (novel) added comma for readability Tag: Visual edit
- 02:1602:16, 20 April 2024 diff hist 0 Shōgun (novel) made more parralell Tag: Visual edit
- 02:1402:14, 20 April 2024 diff hist −4 Shōgun (novel) added that JB is stuck in Japan Tag: Visual edit
19 April 2024
- 23:3423:34, 19 April 2024 diff hist +189 Talk:Shōgun (novel) →Edit warring/content disputes: Reply Tag: Reply
- 23:3223:32, 19 April 2024 diff hist +6 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: copy, not all affairs are secret, e.g. the Duke of Windsor Tag: Visual edit
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- 23:1523:15, 19 April 2024 diff hist −2 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: One word for two Tag: Visual edit
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- 22:5522:55, 19 April 2024 diff hist −65 Shōgun (novel) →Premise: better account of the book’s scope mainly by rearrangement Tag: Visual edit
- 22:4422:44, 19 April 2024 diff hist +4 Shōgun (novel) missing article Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3922:39, 19 April 2024 diff hist +96 Talk:Shōgun (novel) →Edit warring/content disputes: Reply Tag: Reply
- 22:3722:37, 19 April 2024 diff hist +216 Shōgun (novel) copy editing and restoration of key developments such as Toranaga blocking Portuguese trade that precipitate much of that which follows Tag: Visual edit
- 22:1022:10, 19 April 2024 diff hist +5 Shōgun (novel) run on sentence Tag: Visual edit
- 22:0122:01, 19 April 2024 diff hist −10 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: The crew was not of interest Tag: Visual edit
- 21:5921:59, 19 April 2024 diff hist +42 Shōgun (novel) tightened up the chronology Tag: Visual edit
- 21:1921:19, 19 April 2024 diff hist +60 Shōgun (novel) more context Tag: Visual edit
- 21:1521:15, 19 April 2024 diff hist +1 Shōgun (novel) less precious Tag: Visual edit
- 21:1221:12, 19 April 2024 diff hist +6 Shōgun (novel) copy Tag: Visual edit
- 21:1021:10, 19 April 2024 diff hist −1 Shōgun (novel) readability Tag: Visual edit
- 21:0721:07, 19 April 2024 diff hist +91 Shōgun (novel) →Premise: the book is all about what lead the Shogante returning after 30 years of dormancy Tag: Visual edit
- 20:3720:37, 19 April 2024 diff hist +307 User talk:Soetermans No edit summary Tags: Reverted New topic
- 20:2220:22, 19 April 2024 diff hist +72 Shōgun (novel) Toranaga finds out the Portuguese want his head. Big shock and essential to include Tag: Visual edit
- 20:1620:16, 19 April 2024 diff hist −9 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: fix Tag: Visual edit
- 20:1320:13, 19 April 2024 diff hist −5 Shōgun (novel) →Premise: “coinciding” has no logical place here and, again, the book closes after, and only after, the battle Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0920:09, 19 April 2024 diff hist −6 Shōgun (novel) The most critical revelation to Toranaga is is restored, as it must be Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0420:04, 19 April 2024 diff hist +124 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: Mariko is beyond merely proffering loyalty, she is loyal. The colonial aspect is critical. This tells Toranaga that the Portuguese want to be be rid of him as an unaligned heretic. Plus most alarming is that Portugal has sent mercenaries to wreak havoc in Japan to further colonial ends Tag: Visual edit
- 19:5019:50, 19 April 2024 diff hist +12 Shōgun (novel) When you can say the same with fewer words and better cadence, you do it Tag: Visual edit
- 19:4719:47, 19 April 2024 diff hist 0 Shōgun (novel) cap Tag: Visual edit
- 19:4619:46, 19 April 2024 diff hist −7 Shōgun (novel) redundant Tag: Visual edit
- 19:4519:45, 19 April 2024 diff hist −15 Shōgun (novel) Basic stuff: there is no style guide that will approve of a sentences opening prepositional phrase “In 1980” justifiably needing a comma, ever. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:4119:41, 19 April 2024 diff hist 0 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: Portuguese are also “Western Europeans”. This is an egregiosly uniformed edit Tag: Visual edit
- 19:3919:39, 19 April 2024 diff hist +6 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: clarifying that it was one person Tag: Visual edit
- 19:3719:37, 19 April 2024 diff hist +75 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: Nothing upset Toranaga more than learning that Portuguese hired Ronins from Macau attacked Japan. It was the Christian lords who snatched JB from prison in broad daylight, so ”steal” is a bit of a stretch Tag: Visual edit
- 19:2219:22, 19 April 2024 diff hist +70 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: Again, short propositional phrases, in this case an extremely short one, need no comma. Also, historical accuracy, or at least what Clavell relates as historical, has been restored. Blackthorne at this point only spoke of the conflict between England and Portugal, a key dynamic the Jesuits studiously withheld from their hosts: Portuguese traders were not mentioned yet. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:5318:53, 19 April 2024 diff hist −1 Shōgun (novel) put year in parentheses Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:4718:47, 19 April 2024 diff hist −9 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: Hiromatsu has no use for the crew (plural), on the pilot, who as one person, is not the crew Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:4318:43, 19 April 2024 diff hist −31 Shōgun (novel) →Premise: coincided with nothing, really, per corrected copy. And addd “true” to “exploits” since without that adjective, the reader would not no if William Adams fictional or not. Let’s try to be more careful Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:3718:37, 19 April 2024 diff hist +4 Shōgun (novel) better cadence Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:3618:36, 19 April 2024 diff hist +24 Shōgun (novel) Shorter sentences are prefered, per Strunk and White Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:3218:32, 19 April 2024 diff hist −5 Shōgun (novel) cleanup Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:3218:32, 19 April 2024 diff hist −25 Shōgun (novel) ‘It is also” (besides being too soon for any use of “also”0 is poor use of a verb when published serves that purpose much better being more direct and emphatic. Recommending Strunk and White. It has helped many an undergrad Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:2618:26, 19 April 2024 diff hist −1 Shōgun (novel) removed comma presumably left by mistake Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:2418:24, 19 April 2024 diff hist +7 Shōgun (novel) copy Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:2418:24, 19 April 2024 diff hist −1 Shōgun (novel) fixed common mistake, commas are not required for short prepositional phrases and are generally not preferred by good writers Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 18:2218:22, 19 April 2024 diff hist +16 Shōgun (novel) Corrected copy an editor aware the book ends after the battle, but briefly so, hence almost entirely Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 17:5217:52, 19 April 2024 diff hist +327 Shōgun (novel) →Reception: Clavell’s pov Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 17:3317:33, 19 April 2024 diff hist −2 Shōgun (novel) less halting and abrupt plus being Australian is no minor fact, being central to any critical take on the novels viewpoint and possible biases, in particular a possible white savior bias Tags: Reverted Visual edit
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- 04:3704:37, 19 April 2024 diff hist +40 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: added detail of hill was returned to Toranaga. Tag: Visual edit
- 04:3304:33, 19 April 2024 diff hist −9 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: outside of Blackthorne, the crew wasn’t wanted Tag: Visual edit
- 04:3104:31, 19 April 2024 diff hist −2 Shōgun (novel) →Premise: better adverb Tag: Visual edit
- 04:3004:30, 19 April 2024 diff hist +4 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: could have inferred that the Jesuits were loyal to Toranaga Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3503:35, 19 April 2024 diff hist +7 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: put a name on it Tag: Visual edit
- 03:3003:30, 19 April 2024 diff hist −20 Shōgun (novel) TMI for premise Tag: Visual edit
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- 02:5302:53, 19 April 2024 diff hist +211 Shōgun (novel) more on the Portuguese’s colonial aspirations. And the enmity between England and Catholics Tag: Visual edit
18 April 2024
- 19:4219:42, 18 April 2024 diff hist +10 Shōgun (novel) Added feudal Japan to lead Tag: Visual edit
- 19:4119:41, 18 April 2024 diff hist −34 Shōgun (novel) the incomplete adaptations restored and a lead complaint wit WP Lead guidelines Tag: Visual edit
- 19:3619:36, 18 April 2024 diff hist +122 User talk:5ive9teen →Shōgun (novel) lead: Reply Tags: Reverted Reply
- 19:3519:35, 18 April 2024 diff hist +2 Shōgun (novel) grammar fixed Tag: Visual edit
- 19:3419:34, 18 April 2024 diff hist +136 Shōgun (novel) Undid revision 1219605522 by Soetermans (talk) editor restored false information Tag: Undo
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- 19:1319:13, 18 April 2024 diff hist +57 Shōgun (novel) clarification Tag: Visual edit
- 19:0719:07, 18 April 2024 diff hist −35 Shōgun (novel) removed error regarding Asian saga first book’s publishing date Tag: Visual edit
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- 18:1918:19, 18 April 2024 diff hist +58 Shōgun (novel) added Shōgun based games Tag: Visual edit
- 18:1618:16, 18 April 2024 diff hist −33 Shōgun (novel) Plot’s extranea removed and length more than halved Tag: Visual edit: Switched
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- 16:5816:58, 18 April 2024 diff hist +108 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: more on Blackthorne’s rise Tag: Visual edit
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- 16:4216:42, 18 April 2024 diff hist +66 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: thematic grouping and more indicating Toranaga’s plan Tag: Visual edit
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- 16:0716:07, 18 April 2024 diff hist +34 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: more on the assassin Tag: Visual edit
- 16:0416:04, 18 April 2024 diff hist −5 Shōgun (novel) →Plot: better word Tag: Visual edit
- 16:0116:01, 18 April 2024 diff hist +25 Shōgun (novel) The novel ends after the battle with Ishido’s execution Tag: Visual edit
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- 15:5015:50, 18 April 2024 diff hist −2 Shōgun (novel) historical errors fixed Tag: Visual edit
- 15:4215:42, 18 April 2024 diff hist +18 Shōgun (novel) Significant context added Tag: Visual edit
- 07:4807:48, 18 April 2024 diff hist −30 Shōgun (novel) Copy Tag: Visual edit
- 07:4007:40, 18 April 2024 diff hist −15 Shōgun (novel) clean up Tag: Visual edit
- 07:3107:31, 18 April 2024 diff hist −1,815 Shōgun (novel) concision Tag: Visual edit
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- 04:5904:59, 18 April 2024 diff hist +2 Shōgun (novel) preposition Tag: Visual edit
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- 00:0700:07, 17 April 2024 diff hist −40 Shōgun (novel) Condensed plot to more critical actions with less focus on lessor particulars , e.g. the trials and tribulations of the Dutch Crew, all of whom become NPCs for the rest of the story except to empathize that very fact. Tag: Visual edit
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