User contributions for Stephen Hui
A user with 3,795 edits. Account created on 21 November 2005.
5 June 2024
- 01:0601:06, 5 June 2024 diff hist −54 Juncos Hollinger Racing →Ricardo Juncos: Deleted subjective, uncited "who grew up with a deep passion and desire for racing" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 00:5200:52, 5 June 2024 diff hist −9 Agustín Canapino →Personal life: "renowned race car mechanic" --> "race car mechanic" per MOS:PUFFERY: "Words to watch: renowned. Words such as these are often used without attribution to promote the subject of an article, while neither imparting nor plainly summarizing verifiable information" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
1 June 2024
- 18:4618:46, 1 June 2024 diff hist 0 Steelcase →COVID-19 response: “COVID-19 Response” —> “COVID-19 response” per MOS:HEAD: “Section headings should […] be presented in sentence case not title case” current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
27 May 2024
- 01:5101:51, 27 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Warren Hue Grammar/typo fix: "a student as British School Jakarta" --> "a student at British School Jakarta" current
- 01:4901:49, 27 May 2024 diff hist −2 m Typhoon Cobra Alphabetized a list which was previously ordered by (I think) whether lost or damaged, then combat power (assessed subjective/semi-arbitrarily, with CVEs being before the BB), then by pennant number; to a reader not possessing this information, the list order appeared arbitrary current
- 01:3801:38, 27 May 2024 diff hist +2 m Typhoon Cobra Rephrased an awkward sentence: "led to the establishment of weather infrastructure of the U.S. Navy" --> "prompted the U.S. Navy to establish weather monitoring infrastructure"
- 01:3201:32, 27 May 2024 diff hist +8 Typhoon Cobra →Ships lost or damaged: Renamed "Ships damaged" section to "Ships lost or damaged" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
26 May 2024
- 19:0319:03, 26 May 2024 diff hist −10 m Naval Base Ulithi Various minor capitalization and grammar fixes to image captions
- 18:3718:37, 26 May 2024 diff hist −20 m Naval Base Ulithi Reworded an awkward sentence ("The court was held to see if any action were to be done" --> "to determine if Halsey should be sanctioned")
- 18:3018:30, 26 May 2024 diff hist 0 Naval Base Ulithi →Fleet support: Section heading "Fleet Support" --> "Fleet support" per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings should [...] be presented in sentence case not title case" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 01:3601:36, 26 May 2024 diff hist −7 Public housing Reverted good faith edit by Nsae Comp because a) the phrase "housing government authority", while not technically incorrect, is very unusual word ordering, with Google only finding a page's worth of search results for the term while "government housing authority" is much more commonly used, and b) wikilinking "housing" is unnecessary per MOS:OVERLINK ("what generally should not be linked [...] everyday words understood by most readers in context")
- 01:1801:18, 26 May 2024 diff hist 0 The Last Stand of the Tin Can Sailors →Graphic novel: Section heading "Graphic Novel" --> "Graphic novel" per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings should [...] be presented in sentence case not title case" current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 00:3700:37, 26 May 2024 diff hist 0 Danielle Smith →UCP leadership race: Improper noun "Leadership" --> "leadership" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
21 May 2024
- 06:3706:37, 21 May 2024 diff hist 0 Johnny Marr "the The" --> "The The" Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 06:3606:36, 21 May 2024 diff hist +4 Modest Mouse →Formation and early years: 1992–1999: "a.k.a." --> {{a.k.a.}} current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 06:0206:02, 21 May 2024 diff hist −295 Conscientious objector Removed statement in opening sentence that "conscientious objector" is "often shortened to 'conchie'"; the cited reference was from 1917, the Cambridge Dictionary says the term is "old-fashioned", the OED says it's "chiefly historical", and Collins says the word is "used rarely" current
- 05:5305:53, 21 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Public housing Improper noun "Housing authority" --> "housing authority"
- 05:5205:52, 21 May 2024 diff hist −11 m George R. R. Martin "chess bubble burst" --> "chess craze subsided" per MOS:IDIOM: "if a literal reading of a phrase makes no sense given the context, the sentence needs rewording"
- 05:3705:37, 21 May 2024 diff hist +2 m The Winds of Winter Removed slashes from infobox per MOS:SLASH: "Generally, avoid joining two words with a slash [...] Replace with clearer wording."
- 04:5604:56, 21 May 2024 diff hist +15 Paul Brandt →Early life: Copy edit to avoid repetition of "Alberta" twice in seven words current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 04:5104:51, 21 May 2024 diff hist +3 Paul Brandt "RN" --> "nurse" as many may not be familiar with the initialism Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
20 May 2024
- 02:3002:30, 20 May 2024 diff hist −23 Giraffe weevil Removed 19-year-old template designating the article as a stub; the template was applied when the article was one sentence long, but it's reasonably comprehensive now Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 02:2102:21, 20 May 2024 diff hist −12 Giraffe weevil →Predators: Rephrased an awkward sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 02:1602:16, 20 May 2024 diff hist −16 Giraffe weevil Copy edit to remove redundant text from the first two sentences Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 02:0702:07, 20 May 2024 diff hist 0 History of Chile "President" --> "president" per per MOS:JOBTITLE: "positions such as president [...] are common nouns and therefore should be in lower case when used generically" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 01:5201:52, 20 May 2024 diff hist −9 Ascidiacea →Culinary: Changed spelling of "Geoje Island" to match the spelling used in the Wikipedia article current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 01:4701:47, 20 May 2024 diff hist −2 Tunicate Deleted unnecessary single quotation marks Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
19 May 2024
- 06:4706:47, 19 May 2024 diff hist +28 Warren Hue Flagged as needing a copy edit -- there are grammar errors, randomly capitalized words, references to Hue by his first name, table formatting issues, and at least one orphaned/nonsensical sentence fragment Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 06:3806:38, 19 May 2024 diff hist −140 Lyn Lapid →Career: Rephrased two sentences copied almost verbatim from the cited Rolling Stone article per WP:PARAPHRASE and MOS:IDIOM Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 00:5900:59, 19 May 2024 diff hist −401 Cuisine of the Pennsylvania Dutch Removed unattributed quote that just restated the first and last sentences of the section anyway current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
18 May 2024
- 17:1517:15, 18 May 2024 diff hist −1 Douglas A-4 Skyhawk Removed period from a caption per MOS:CAPFRAG: "Most captions are not complete sentences, but merely sentence fragments, which should not end with a period or full stop" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
17 May 2024
- 22:2822:28, 17 May 2024 diff hist −6 m Japanese battleship Hiei Rephrased a sentence to remove odd, informal phrasing "torpedoes courtesy of USS Sealion"
16 May 2024
- 07:0707:07, 16 May 2024 diff hist +1 Alaska-class cruiser Added a comma in the middle of a long sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
15 May 2024
- 22:3722:37, 15 May 2024 diff hist −18 Carroll Baker Removed subjective and informal descriptor "potboiler" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
14 May 2024
- 00:5100:51, 14 May 2024 diff hist 0 Photochemistry →Learned societies: Improper noun “Learned Societies” —> “Learned societies” Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
11 May 2024
- 22:3422:34, 11 May 2024 diff hist +16 Stephen K. Benjamin Split a wikilink into two current
- 22:3122:31, 11 May 2024 diff hist +450 Wikipedia:Requested moves/Technical requests Change Office of Public Liaison back to its former (and now current) name White House Office of Public Engagement
10 May 2024
- 03:4903:49, 10 May 2024 diff hist +8 Cas Anvar Copy edit; no content changes Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
5 May 2024
- 07:3807:38, 5 May 2024 diff hist −11 Serama →History: Rephrased a sentence to remove the statement "the breed was hit hard" per MOS:IDIOM: "if a literal reading of a phrase makes no sense given the context, the sentence needs rewording" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 01:1001:10, 5 May 2024 diff hist −4 Airbus A380 →Passenger provisions: "The Air Austral's" --> "Air Austral's" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
4 May 2024
- 19:0919:09, 4 May 2024 diff hist +3 Japanese battleship Hiei "Hiei was crippled shell hits" --> "Hiei was crippled by shell hits" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 02:5402:54, 4 May 2024 diff hist −1 BioViva British spelling "ageing" --> American spelling "aging" since this is an article about an American company Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
2 May 2024
- 06:5406:54, 2 May 2024 diff hist +7 INS Vikramaditya Commented out purchase price information which, upon further research, I believe to be inaccurately summarized; I'll come back to fix this later if no one beats me to it Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 06:3606:36, 2 May 2024 diff hist 0 INS Vikrant (2013) →Repeat order: Section heading "Repeat Order" --> "Repeat order" per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings should [...] be presented in sentence case not title case" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 06:3406:34, 2 May 2024 diff hist 0 Indian Navy →Later revival: Section heading "Later Revival" --> "Later revival" per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings should [...] be presented in sentence case not title case" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 06:3206:32, 2 May 2024 diff hist −25 INS Vikramaditya Grammar fixes; no content changes Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 04:2404:24, 2 May 2024 diff hist −4 Chinese aircraft carrier Liaoning →Modernization and refurbishment: Grammar: "In 2011 an analyst has spotted" --> "In 2011 an analyst spotted" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 03:3603:36, 2 May 2024 diff hist +2 Fool's Gold Loaf →Preparation: Increased precision of a unit conversion current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 03:3203:32, 2 May 2024 diff hist +2 Fool's Gold Loaf Increased number of significant digits in a unit conversion, as one pound is 454 grams, not 450 Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
29 April 2024
- 06:4006:40, 29 April 2024 diff hist −4 m Russian invasion of Ukraine Removed some brackets from quoted text per MOS:CONFORM: "if the quoted passage has been integrated into the surrounding sentence, the original capital letter may be lower-cased. It is normally unnecessary to explicitly note changes in capitalization."
- 06:2506:25, 29 April 2024 diff hist +1 m HESA Kowsar Changed common adjectives and noun from capitalized to lowercase
- 06:2106:21, 29 April 2024 diff hist −262 m Good Food Awards Removed a bunch of dead and outdated links current
- 06:2006:20, 29 April 2024 diff hist +12 m Good Food Awards Changed parameter used to list award categories to make them display better; yes, Gonnym, I know this isn't "using the parameter correctly", but I can't find a more appropriate parameter, and no one will know unless they read the page source
- 06:1506:15, 29 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Good Food Awards Fixed homepage link
- 06:1306:13, 29 April 2024 diff hist +301 Good Food Awards Restored content deleted by Gonnym because they were unhappy about how it had been presented in a version of the article that predated the version they edited Tag: Undo
- 06:1106:11, 29 April 2024 diff hist +584 Template talk:Infobox award →Add option to skip automatic formatting from current awards?: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 02:0102:01, 29 April 2024 diff hist −32 m Haruna-class destroyer Grammar fixes; no content changes Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
28 April 2024
- 19:1119:11, 28 April 2024 diff hist −6 m Fulbright Program Removed hard-coded image width of 600px, as it made the accompanying quote illegible on a tablet
- 02:3702:37, 28 April 2024 diff hist +451 Template talk:Infobox award →Add option to skip automatic formatting from current awards?: Reply Tag: Reply
- 02:3202:32, 28 April 2024 diff hist 0 Japanese destroyer Yūdachi (1936) →Operational history: Grammar fixes; no content changes current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
27 April 2024
- 18:5618:56, 27 April 2024 diff hist +6 m Good Food Awards Copy edit; no content changes
- 18:5518:55, 27 April 2024 diff hist −20 m Good Food Awards Moved contents of current_awards field in infobox to subheader because current_awards wasn't rendering correctly
- 18:5318:53, 27 April 2024 diff hist +686 Template talk:Infobox award →Add option to skip automatic formatting from current awards?: new section Tag: New topic
- 18:1718:17, 27 April 2024 diff hist −2 m Robin Boyd Award Section heading "Multiple Winners" --> "Multiple winners" per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings should [...] be presented in sentence case not title case"
26 April 2024
- 01:2501:25, 26 April 2024 diff hist −2 m USS Kentucky (BB-66) Odd phrasing "rampant pace" --> "rapid pace" current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
24 April 2024
- 06:2706:27, 24 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Trusted Platform Module Changed section heading to sentence case per MOS:HEAD: "Section headings should [...] be presented in sentence case not title case" Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
21 April 2024
- 01:0501:05, 21 April 2024 diff hist −21 m 2014 Isla Vista killings Replaced instances of Rodger's first name with his last name per MOS:LASTNAME: "After the initial mention, a person should generally be referred to by surname only"
20 April 2024
- 04:5504:55, 20 April 2024 diff hist −479 McDonnell Douglas F-15 STOL/MTD Removed an awkwardly worded sentence describing a film in which the F-15 appears, as opposed to the F-15 itself, and drawing sweeping conclusions from one article Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
19 April 2024
- 06:3306:33, 19 April 2024 diff hist +2 Doolittle Raid "&" --> "and" per MOS:&: "In normal text and headings, use and instead of the ampersand" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 06:3106:31, 19 April 2024 diff hist −35 Doolittle Raid Removed meaningless phrase "as part of the undertaken strategy" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
18 April 2024
- 22:5922:59, 18 April 2024 diff hist −82 Phosmet →Toxicity: Copy edit; no content changes current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 00:3800:38, 18 April 2024 diff hist −2 LegalZoom →Reception: Quoted text "[u]sing" --> "using" per MOS:CONFORM: "if the quoted passage has been integrated into the surrounding sentence, the original capital letter may be lower-cased. It is normally unnecessary to explicitly note changes in capitalization." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
14 April 2024
- 19:4419:44, 14 April 2024 diff hist +4 Daniel O. Graham →Death: Copy edit, no content changes Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 18:2318:23, 14 April 2024 diff hist +185 m Kara Hultgreen Added Wayback Machine archive URL for a dead reference link
- 16:1216:12, 14 April 2024 diff hist −528 HESA Kowsar Removed subjective and hyperbolic commentary ("a big joke", "could save Iran's air force") from a commentator whose bio lists him as a blogger
- 06:2406:24, 14 April 2024 diff hist −1 Castor oil →Punishment: Removed space between two citations Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
13 April 2024
- 19:2019:20, 13 April 2024 diff hist 0 USS John F. Kennedy (CV-67) "the 35th President of the United States" --> "the 35th president of the United States" per MOS:JOBTITLE: "positions such as president [...] are common nouns and therefore should be in lower case when used generically" [...] (e.g.) Nixon was the 37th president of the United States" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
- 16:5116:51, 13 April 2024 diff hist −1 Big Dig →Origin: "mid-day" --> "midday" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Advanced mobile edit
