User contributions for Sahadawiki
A user with 104 edits. Account created on 3 January 2024.
16 May 2024
- 22:2022:20, 16 May 2024 diff hist +18 m The Catcher in the Rye →Plot: Minor edits for writing quality only (e.g. swapped 'academy' for 'school' to eliminate word repetition in close proximity.~~~~~ current Tag: Visual edit
- 22:1322:13, 16 May 2024 diff hist −62 m The Catcher in the Rye →Plot: Edits for writing quality and concision only (e.g. changed 'turns sour' to simply 'sours,' etc.)~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 22:0522:05, 16 May 2024 diff hist −1 m The Catcher in the Rye →Plot: Minor edits for writing clarity and flow only—with no change to content (e.g. insertion of a missing 'he').~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 21:5821:58, 16 May 2024 diff hist −1,251 m The Catcher in the Rye →Plot: Edits for writing quality only: Responded to Wikipedia's prompt to make this Plot Summary more concise, more streamlined, and freer of excess detail.~~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 21:1121:11, 16 May 2024 diff hist +4 m The Catcher in the Rye →Plot: Changed 'leaving' to 'heading out,' given the context.~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 21:0921:09, 16 May 2024 diff hist −46 m The Catcher in the Rye Edits for writing quality and clarity only—with no change to content (e.g. inserted/ deleted commas, and rephrased slightly to eliminate repetition of 'life'/ 'live'/ 'living' in the same sentance, etc.)~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
10 May 2024
- 16:2216:22, 10 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Ricki Lake →Personal life: Inserted a serial comma (and slightly repositioned another comma).~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 16:1816:18, 10 May 2024 diff hist +2 Ricki Lake →Personal life: Inserted two commas~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 16:1716:17, 10 May 2024 diff hist −7 m Ricki Lake →Personal life: Deleted the superfluous word 'actual'~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
2 May 2024
- 20:5520:55, 2 May 2024 diff hist +76 m Carl Sagan Edits for writing quality and clarity only—with no change to content (e.g. inserted, streamlined excess verbiage, found synonyms to replace word repetitions in close proximity, and changed past-tense verbs to the past-perfect tense, as supported by the context, etc.)~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 20:3420:34, 2 May 2024 diff hist −61 m Carl Sagan Edits for writing quality and clarity only—with no change to content (e.g. inserted commas, inserted hyphens, streamlined excess verbiage, and elimated word repetitions in close proximity, and, as a specific example, corrected 'helping soothing,' changing it to 'helped soothe,' etc.)~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
1 May 2024
- 04:0404:04, 1 May 2024 diff hist −5 m Paul Auster →Personal life and death: Edits for writing quality and clarity only—with no change to content (e.g. most significantly: changed many verbs to the past tense because Paul Auster, the subject of this entry, recently died—a factthis entry otherwise acknowledges... but the verb tenses still need updating.)~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
27 April 2024
- 21:2621:26, 27 April 2024 diff hist −1 m Susan Berman →Murder: Changed another instance of 're-opened' to 'reopened'~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 21:2221:22, 27 April 2024 diff hist +42 m Susan Berman →Murder: Edits for writing quality and clarity (e.g. changed 're-opened' to 'reopened,' etc.)~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 21:1021:10, 27 April 2024 diff hist +73 m Susan Berman →Murder: Edits for writing quality and clarity only—with no change to content (e.g. inserted commas, inserted hyphens, and changed 'over' to 'more than,' etc.)~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 21:0221:02, 27 April 2024 diff hist +17 m Susan Berman →Personal life: inserted a serial comma.~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 21:0021:00, 27 April 2024 diff hist −9 Susan Berman →Personal life: Changed "Benedict Canyon, a suburb of Los Angeles' to 'Benedict Canyon, in Los Angeles'—as verified by its own hot-linked Wikipedia entry, Benedict Canyon is part of Los Angeles -- and certainly not a suburb of it.~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 19:3319:33, 27 April 2024 diff hist +19 m Robert Durst →Capital crimes for which Durst was investigated: Organized /clarified the sentence simply to identify the common character of the three items that follow the colon (as 'three alleged crimes').~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 19:2619:26, 27 April 2024 diff hist +7 m Robert Durst →Early life: Inserted the word 'eldest' in the phrase 'he was the [eldest] son...,' as substantiated by the rest of this paragraph.~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 19:2319:23, 27 April 2024 diff hist +35 Robert Durst →Early life: Minor edits for writing clarity and flow only—with no change to content (including inserting commas, streamlining excess verbiage, swapping pronouns for nouns, or vice versa, and eliminating word repetitions in close proximity). Also added a parenthetical identifying Prudence Farrow as Mia Farrow's sister, as verified by Prudence Farrow's own Wikipedia entry (to which the mention of her name here is hot linked).~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
25 April 2024
- 18:5718:57, 25 April 2024 diff hist −73 m Karen McDougal →Personal life: Edits for writing quality and clarity only—with no change to content (e.g. inserted and deleted commas, inserted hyphens, streamlined excess verbiage, found synonyms to replace word repetitions in close proximity, and changed the passive verb construction in several instances to the active one, etc.)~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
21 April 2024
- 06:1006:10, 21 April 2024 diff hist +9 m Lucien Carr →Dissenting opinions: Edits for writing quality and clarity only—with no change to content (e.g. inserted the phrase 'she said.')~~~~~ current Tag: Visual edit
- 06:0506:05, 21 April 2024 diff hist −129 m Lucien Carr →Dissenting opinions: Edits for writing quality and clarity only—with no change to content (e.g. split a run-on sentence into two separate, more succinct ones; streamlined excess verbiage.)~~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 05:3005:30, 21 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Lucien Carr →Dissenting opinions: Inserted two commas~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
20 April 2024
- 01:2601:26, 20 April 2024 diff hist +124 m Lynda Resnick Edits for writing quality only—with no change to content (e.g. inserted commas; and made 'Pentagon Papers' a hot Wikipedia link on its first mention, instead of on a later mention.)~~~~~ Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
19 April 2024
- 19:0719:07, 19 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Getty family →Family members: Corrected spelling of 'married.'~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 19:0419:04, 19 April 2024 diff hist +17 m Getty family Turned a few lines for clarity.~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 19:0119:01, 19 April 2024 diff hist +23 m Getty family →Family members: Added a few bullet points (and line turns) for clarity.~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 18:5618:56, 19 April 2024 diff hist +727 m Getty family →Family members: Edits for writing quality and clarity only—with no change to content (e.g. reformatted list slightly to identify all five marriages in same way; also, for clarity, replaced certain pronouns with the proper nouns they reference, etc.) Tag: Visual edit
18 April 2024
- 00:3300:33, 18 April 2024 diff hist −13 m Minouche Shafik →Academic work: Deleted the phrase "a number of"—which is merely excess verbiage in this particular context that does not change the content or meaning (regardless of whether that phrase is included or excluded),~~~~~ Tag: Visual edit
- 00:2800:28, 18 April 2024 diff hist +66 m Minouche Shafik →London School of Economics: Edits for writing quality only—with no change to content: e.g. Inserted commas, changed British to American spelling (as in casualisation to casualization), etc. Tag: Visual edit
17 April 2024
- 17:1817:18, 17 April 2024 diff hist −2 m Robin Pogrebin →Biography: Changed 'the' to 'a' (as she is clearly not the only daughter... given the existence, mentioned in the same paragraph, of her twin sister)~~~~~ current Tag: Visual edit
- 17:1717:17, 17 April 2024 diff hist −2 m Abigail Pogrebin →Family and early life: Changed 'the' to 'a' (as she is clearly not the only daughter... given the existence, mentioned in the same paragraph, of her twin sister)~~~~~ Tags: Reverted Visual edit
13 April 2024
- 05:3805:38, 13 April 2024 diff hist +20 m Dev Patel →Early life and education: Edits for writing quality only—with no change to content (e.g. changed 'advert' to the American 'advertisement' and 'characterisation' to the American 'characterization,' etc.) Tag: Visual edit
12 April 2024
- 23:3423:34, 12 April 2024 diff hist +17 m Ron Goldman →Death: Edits for writing quality only—with no change to content (e.g. changed certain verb tenses from past to pluperfect),~~~~~
- 23:2723:27, 12 April 2024 diff hist −5 m Ron Goldman →In California: Edits for writing quality, clarity, and flow only—with no change to content (e.g. changed second mention in a row of 'with friends' to 'with them.')~~~~~s .
- 23:1923:19, 12 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Ron Goldman →In California: Changed 'choosing' to 'but chose.'~~~~~
- 23:1823:18, 12 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Ron Goldman →In California: Inserted a serial comma.~~~~~
- 23:1023:10, 12 April 2024 diff hist +4 m Nicole Brown Simpson →Relationship with O. J. Simpson: Edits for writing quality, clarity, and flow only—with no change to content (e.g. inserted the word 'still').~~~~~
- 23:0423:04, 12 April 2024 diff hist −76 m Nicole Brown Simpson →Relationship with O. J. Simpson: Edits for writing quality only—with no change to content (e.g. substituted 'within' for 'during' to eliminated too many repetitions of same word within close proximity).~~~~~
- 22:4122:41, 12 April 2024 diff hist −3 m Nicole Brown Simpson →Early life: Edits for writing quality only—with no change to content (e.g. inserted commas and deleted an unnecessary repetition of the word 'was').~~~~~
- 22:3922:39, 12 April 2024 diff hist +3 m Nicole Brown Simpson →Early life: Edits for writing quality only—with no change to content (e.g. inserted commas).~~~~~
- 22:3622:36, 12 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Nicole Brown Simpson Edits for writing quality only—with no change to content (e.g. inserted a comma).~~~~~
- 22:2322:23, 12 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Roberto Cavalli →Career: Edits for writing, clarity, and flow only—with no change to content (e.g. inserted a missing space, and also replaced 'wear' with a couple ofequivalent synonyms because 'wear' had appeared at least six times in the same sentence.)~~~~~
- 22:2022:20, 12 April 2024 diff hist −38 m Roberto Cavalli →Career: Edits for writing, clarity, and flow only—with no change to content (e.g. streamlined sentence to eliminate redundant info, already stated earlier in the same paragraph, etc.)~~~~~
- 22:1122:11, 12 April 2024 diff hist −6 m Roberto Cavalli →Career: Deleted the subject's first name, as this was not the first mention—and there was no ambiguity in this context about which Cavalli was being discussed. Also turned a line to create a new paragraph, as the entry had shifted to new subject matter, meriting its own paragraph.~~~~~
- 22:0722:07, 12 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Roberto Cavalli Edits for writing quality only—with no change to content (e.g. changed 'procedure' to 'process').~~~~~
- 22:0322:03, 12 April 2024 diff hist +6 m Roberto Cavalli Edits for writing quality only—with no change to content (e.g. 'concentrating in' to 'concentrating on'; and changed 'factories' to 'manufacturers' as factories (unlike manufacturers) and inanimate objects, so you can't, as the sentence suggests, catch their attention.)
- 13:3613:36, 12 April 2024 diff hist +13 m Larry Rivers →Personal life: Changed pronoun 'they' to 'Larry and Clarice' (to whom 'they' had referred). current Tag: Visual edit
- 13:3413:34, 12 April 2024 diff hist +7 m Larry Rivers →Personal life: Edits for writing quality only—with no change to content (e.g. added commas and deleted others; within main text body, changed 'from 1953-57' to 'from 1953 through 1957'; etc.) Tag: Visual edit
- 13:2513:25, 12 April 2024 diff hist −1 m Larry Rivers →Personal life: Changed 'favourite' to American spelling: 'favorite.' Tag: Visual edit
- 13:2313:23, 12 April 2024 diff hist +8 m Larry Rivers →Career: Within the main text body, changed ''from 1947-48'" to "from 1947 through 1948." Tag: Visual edit
- 13:1813:18, 12 April 2024 diff hist +8 m Frank O'Hara →Poetry: inserted the word 'current' for clarity. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
- 13:1713:17, 12 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Frank O'Hara →Poetry: Edits for writing quality only—with no change to content (e.g. added commas and deleted others; changed passive verb onstructions to active ones; changed ordinary dashes to an m-dashes, where appropriate, etc.) Tag: Visual edit
- 12:5912:59, 12 April 2024 diff hist −11 m Frank O'Hara →Early life and education: Edits for writing quality, clarity, and flow only—with no change to content (e.g. modified 'He grew up believing he had been born in June, but in fact had been born in March - his parents disguised his true date of birth because he was conceived out of wedlock.' to read instead: 'He grew up believing his birthday was in June, when, in fact, he had been born in March—his parents disguised his true date of birth because he had been conceived out of wedlock.') Tag: Visual edit
