User contributions for Ornilnas
A user with 944 edits. Account created on 16 June 2005.
21 May 2024
- 17:2217:22, 21 May 2024 diff hist +533 Talk:Israel–Hamas war →RfC on inclusion of Hamas sexual violence & rape in lede
- 17:0017:00, 21 May 2024 diff hist +849 Israel–Hamas war →International: The international community have reacted to Hamas' actions as well. This source only covers the October 7 attacks. I suspect many countries and organizations have also denounced Hamas' conduct during the Israeli invasion (using human shields, killing Palestinian civilians). A source mentioning that would be appropriate here.
- 16:4116:41, 21 May 2024 diff hist +254 Talk:Israel–Hamas war →"International repercussions" in lede: Reply Tag: Reply
- 16:3816:38, 21 May 2024 diff hist +1 Israel–Hamas war →Reactions: The protests were not an Israeli reaction, but an international reaction.
- 14:0914:09, 21 May 2024 diff hist −102 Casualties of the Israel–Hamas war →Civilian to military ratio: The first half of the sentence is redundant. The second half kindof summarizes this paragraph, but it is not exclusively about challenges to Israeli numbers.
- 13:5313:53, 21 May 2024 diff hist +18 Israel–Hamas war →West Bank: The combatant status of many of the victims above is probably unknown, but these are confirmed civilians.
- 13:3613:36, 21 May 2024 diff hist −55 Israel–Hamas war hostage crisis Redundant.
- 13:2413:24, 21 May 2024 diff hist −4,112 2023 Hamas-led attack on Israel →Torture and mutilation: All of this is covered in the section below. It's also confusing to mix confirmed false reports with unconfirmed or confirmed true reports in the same paragraph. Tag: Reverted
- 08:0208:02, 21 May 2024 diff hist +570 Talk:Israel–Hamas war →"International repercussions" in lede: Reply Tag: Reply
- 07:5507:55, 21 May 2024 diff hist +735 Talk:Israel–Hamas war →"International repercussions" in lede: Reply Tag: Reply
- 07:4707:47, 21 May 2024 diff hist +680 Talk:Casualties of the Israel–Hamas war →"killed" vs "died": Reply Tag: Reply
- 07:3907:39, 21 May 2024 diff hist +429 User talk:Ornilnas →WP:1RR at Israel-Hamas war: Reply Tag: Reply
- 07:3507:35, 21 May 2024 diff hist −745 Israel–Hamas war →War crimes: The Al Jazeera article is misquoting the primary source, which is quoted in full in the next sentence anyway, so we don't need Al Jazeera's shorter and misleading quote.
- 07:2407:24, 21 May 2024 diff hist +973 Talk:Israel–Hamas war →"International repercussions" in lede: new section Tag: New topic
- 06:3506:35, 21 May 2024 diff hist +126 Israel–Hamas war Undid revision 1224903358 by JDiala (talk) Do you disagree that Hamas has received "widespread international condemnation"? I believe this is covered in several of the sources. If you don't disagree, please improve the wording instead of undoing. Tags: Undo Reverted
- 06:3106:31, 21 May 2024 diff hist +284 Talk:Casualties of the Israel–Hamas war →"killed" vs "died"
- 02:3302:33, 21 May 2024 diff hist −230 Casualties of the Israel–Hamas war →Reactions and analysis: The first source doesn't say the ratio of dead children is what makes it a warcrime. It does explicitly say Hamas perpetrated war crimes on October 7.
- 02:2502:25, 21 May 2024 diff hist −15 Template:Israel–Hamas war casualties The American State Department official only says "it could be" and "it's very possible", despite what the source's first sentence claims. The other source is a press release from the organization Islamic Relief, which gives no basis for the claim.
- 02:0802:08, 21 May 2024 diff hist +126 Israel–Hamas war Or we could state what geographic areas tended to criticize Hamas; perhaps "non-Muslim world"? Either way, both Israel and hamas have received widespread condemnation. Tag: Reverted
- 01:5801:58, 21 May 2024 diff hist +3 2023 Hamas-led attack on Israel These two sentences should form one, so it's clear Hamas only denied the sexual assault. They have not denied killing civilians.
- 01:5401:54, 21 May 2024 diff hist −1 2023 Hamas-led attack on Israel →Hamas: In the source, Hamas seems to agree their fighters killed civilians, albeit by accident.
20 May 2024
- 22:2022:20, 20 May 2024 diff hist +181 Israeli invasion of the Gaza Strip (2023–present) This is sourced in the "Hamas strategy" section, although I wish we had better sources. This is not an elegant solution, but if the lede is going to be so focused on the death toll and number of destroyed buildings, this context is very much needed. Please rewrite if you can weave it in better.
- 22:1022:10, 20 May 2024 diff hist +57 Israeli invasion of the Gaza Strip (2023–present) No edit summary
- 22:0522:05, 20 May 2024 diff hist −72 Israeli invasion of the Gaza Strip (2023–present) →Hamas strategy: To be relevant in this section, it needs to be a deliberate strategy, which the sources claim it is.
- 21:5321:53, 20 May 2024 diff hist +544 Talk:Casualties of the Israel–Hamas war →"killed" vs "died": new section Tag: New topic
- 21:2921:29, 20 May 2024 diff hist −245 Israeli invasion of the Gaza Strip (2023–present) →Civilian casualties: Clearly outdated, besides being unsourced.
- 21:2821:28, 20 May 2024 diff hist −537 Israeli invasion of the Gaza Strip (2023–present) →Civilian casualties: The source is about a November 2023 number of 10k, and also does not claim anyone estimates it is an undercount.
15 May 2024
- 15:1515:15, 15 May 2024 diff hist −54 Discharge of radioactive water of the Fukushima Daiichi Nuclear Power Plant →2023 discharge: The sources do not support this claim. The closest is the Asahi editorial, which claims they didn current