User contributions for Mason.Jones
A user with 4,647 edits. Account created on 22 April 2005.
9 May 2024
- 15:1015:10, 9 May 2024 diff hist −2 United States Fixed typo. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:0615:06, 9 May 2024 diff hist −1 United States Fix typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:0315:03, 9 May 2024 diff hist +48 United States "Autonomous, sovereign Native American 'domestic dependent nations' " is too overwrought and belabored for the lede. The wording also attempts to euphemize the direct WP link Indian reservations, the official name used by the federal government (and preferred by many Native Americans). Reworked as an editorial footnote (efn) -- used with territories, demographics, and other basic lede topics. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
8 May 2024
- 16:2116:21, 8 May 2024 diff hist 0 United States Undid revision 1222825065 by Patriotsontop (talk) -- RV -- WP style requires closing quotation marks *before* a comma or period, unless it's a continuation of long quote. Isolated quotations are not a continuation. Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 May 2024
- 17:1017:10, 7 May 2024 diff hist +1 Paul Auster →Career: Comma required Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:0116:01, 7 May 2024 diff hist 0 California →Languages: Hyphen Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:1415:14, 7 May 2024 diff hist +2 Fat Leonard scandal →Selective overturning of verdicts: Dates adjusted per previous section, "Recapture". current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:1115:11, 7 May 2024 diff hist +2 Fat Leonard scandal →Recapture: Tense: appeared Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:0915:09, 7 May 2024 diff hist 0 Fat Leonard scandal →Individuals involved: Dec. 21, per above section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
6 May 2024
- 22:2822:28, 6 May 2024 diff hist +51 Susie King Taylor Added: standard lead-in sentence for WP-EN biography. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:1620:16, 6 May 2024 diff hist 0 Fat Leonard scandal →Individuals involved: Corrected date Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:1320:13, 6 May 2024 diff hist +30 Fat Leonard scandal →Selective overturning of verdicts: Added: source for last update to chart Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:0620:06, 6 May 2024 diff hist +615 Fat Leonard scandal →Individuals involved: Added : source for last edits. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:1716:17, 6 May 2024 diff hist +39 Fat Leonard scandal →Selective overturning of verdicts: Update: details Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:0716:07, 6 May 2024 diff hist +200 Fat Leonard scandal →Selective overturning of verdicts: Update chart. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4615:46, 6 May 2024 diff hist +70 Fat Leonard scandal →Individuals involved: Split another run-on sentence into 2 sentences. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:3715:37, 6 May 2024 diff hist +28 Fat Leonard scandal Comma after name after name (clause). Break run-on sentence into 2 sentences. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:2115:21, 6 May 2024 diff hist +24 Savannah Historic District (Savannah, Georgia) Vocabulary, usage fixes. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
5 May 2024
- 22:4322:43, 5 May 2024 diff hist +70 Taylor Square (Savannah, Georgia) Complete sentence; some clarity re the church and school, which are not inside the square itself. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:0322:03, 5 May 2024 diff hist −5 Jess Edwards →Child marriage: WP style, punctuation Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:3216:32, 5 May 2024 diff hist +6 Susie King Taylor →Legacy: Restore "First" (deleted by mistake) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:2816:28, 5 May 2024 diff hist −17 Susie King Taylor →Legacy: Year added, per Taylor Square (Savannah, Georgia). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:2116:21, 5 May 2024 diff hist −21 Susie King Taylor →Legacy: Corrections: "her birthplace of Savannah" is wrong; per this article, Taylor was born on Isle of Wight in Liberty County. Also, Midway, Georgia, is not "a few miles from Savannah," but 32 miles south. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:1016:10, 5 May 2024 diff hist −26 Susie King Taylor →Legacy: Edit out repetition, use more direct syntax. Content unchanged. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
4 May 2024
- 21:0921:09, 4 May 2024 diff hist −13 Susie King Taylor →Childhood: Betyer to use name in linjed Wikipedia article. The name "Mary" isn't explained or even mentioned there. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:0421:04, 4 May 2024 diff hist +31 Susie King Taylor →Childhood: Usage, syntax Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:5017:50, 4 May 2024 diff hist −11 Susie King Taylor →Women’s Relief Corps: Wzp style Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:4817:48, 4 May 2024 diff hist −13 Susie King Taylor →Reconstruction: Date added. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:4317:43, 4 May 2024 diff hist +71 Susie King Taylor →Reconstruction: Syntax, punctuation, remove overlink of American Civil War, reorder two paragraphs by dates given. Content unchanged. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Disambiguation links added
- 17:1317:13, 4 May 2024 diff hist +19 Susie King Taylor →Resting place: Syntax fix. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:0817:08, 4 May 2024 diff hist +421 Taylor Square (Savannah, Georgia) Susie King Taylor should be mentioned at outset (per the info in the sources cited). The city council's discussion and adoption of the name (4th paragraph) is more pertinent. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:4316:43, 4 May 2024 diff hist 0 Susie King Taylor WP style: capitalization, hyphenation Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:3416:34, 4 May 2024 diff hist 0 San Francisco The correct 2020 U.S. Census figures for MSA and CSA restored to infobox. (2020 census as well as 2021, 2022, and 2023 estimates were all lower than the last figures shown.) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
3 May 2024
- 20:4120:41, 3 May 2024 diff hist 0 San Francisco MSA listed before CSA in US city articles Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:2620:26, 3 May 2024 diff hist +17 San Francisco Populations with ".0" fractions are not used in Wikipedia. Use whole number. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
2 May 2024
- 22:2222:22, 2 May 2024 diff hist −5 American English Add periods for "U.S." (consistent style of this article and most others related to the United States) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:2022:20, 2 May 2024 diff hist +2 American English Add periods to "U.S." (consistent style of this article and others related to the United States) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:3418:34, 2 May 2024 diff hist −26 Florence Martus Added: year statue erected. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:2518:25, 2 May 2024 diff hist +12 Florence Martus Cite Savannah River earlier in text, before mention of "upriver". Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:1518:15, 2 May 2024 diff hist +14 Florence Martus Grammar fix: name Martus ("her" can't refer to the statue itself) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:0917:09, 2 May 2024 diff hist +11 Gianna Nannini Fix run-on sentence ("latter" info in a separate sentence). current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4715:47, 2 May 2024 diff hist +1 Massie School →Massie Heritage Center: Recast, official names observed; content unchanged. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:3515:35, 2 May 2024 diff hist −15 Savannah-Chatham County Public Schools "Massie Heritage Center," per SCCPSS and other local websites. Deleted word "Interpretation." current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
1 May 2024
- 22:5522:55, 1 May 2024 diff hist +2 Oatland Island Wildlife Center Correct past tense: bound/bounded, not bind/bound. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:1021:10, 1 May 2024 diff hist −12 Savannah, Georgia →Arts: This subheading better as "Arts." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 21:0821:08, 1 May 2024 diff hist −13 Savannah, Georgia →Culture: "Culture" is the usual subheading for cities in Wikipedia with a notable history and cultural imprint. "Parks and recreation" is inadequate for the text it introduces. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:1720:17, 1 May 2024 diff hist +28 United States →European colonization: Columbus' service to Spain should be called out. These far-flung settlements cover three centuries and must be more directly linked to Spain or the Spanish Crown. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:1415:14, 1 May 2024 diff hist +18 Savannah-Chatham County Public Schools Add link to WP article. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:1115:11, 1 May 2024 diff hist +10 Oatland Island Wildlife Center Correct acronym. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:2300:23, 1 May 2024 diff hist +24 Massie School Copyedit; content unchanged. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:0400:04, 1 May 2024 diff hist −32 Savannah-Chatham County Public Schools →Satellite facilities: Official name; no piped names. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
30 April 2024
- 23:5923:59, 30 April 2024 diff hist +14 Savannah-Chatham County Public Schools Updated: superintendent and her title, per infobox and SCCPSS. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:5123:51, 30 April 2024 diff hist +22 Savannah-Chatham County Public Schools Added from article Oatland Island Wildlife Center Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:4823:48, 30 April 2024 diff hist +36 Oatland Island Wildlife Center Finally: added short description from WP article Savannah-Chatham County Public School System. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:4523:45, 30 April 2024 diff hist +43 Savannah-Chatham County Public Schools Copyedit; content unchanged. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:2723:27, 30 April 2024 diff hist +7 Oatland Island Wildlife Center Corrected official name and acronym. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:2423:24, 30 April 2024 diff hist +123 Oatland Island Wildlife Center Reword fir clarity; content unchanged. Changed "in Savannah", as Oatland Island lies outside the City of Savannah. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:0215:02, 30 April 2024 diff hist +136 Languages of the United States Undid revision 1221417769 by OutofaNutshell (talk) -- Rv -- Must agree with Wikipedia article United States and needs RfC discussion there to change. Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit
24 April 2024
- 22:4722:47, 24 April 2024 diff hist −15 United States →Mass media: More direct syntax. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:2418:24, 24 April 2024 diff hist −107 Savannah, Georgia Undid revision 1220583442 by Mason.Jones (talk) RV (cannot insert estimated population field with current infobox perimeters) Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 18:1918:19, 24 April 2024 diff hist +107 Savannah, Georgia No edit summary Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
23 April 2024
- 21:3021:30, 23 April 2024 diff hist 0 Savannah metropolitan area Follow U.S. Census Bureau's official non-capitalization of these terms. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
21 April 2024
- 17:5717:57, 21 April 2024 diff hist +11 Alex Martin (actress) →Personal life: More encyclopedic wording; content unchanged. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:5017:50, 21 April 2024 diff hist 0 Tony Gonzalez →Personal life: Hyphenate Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:4917:49, 21 April 2024 diff hist +2 Tony Gonzalez →Personal life: No ampersand in WP text (except for official names of products, media, book or song titles. Etc.) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:2617:26, 21 April 2024 diff hist +1 Tom Brady →Diet and lifestyle: Required comma (before and after) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
20 April 2024
- 21:2721:27, 20 April 2024 diff hist +7 Harrison Ford →Personal life: Syntax fix; avoid repetition. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:1117:11, 20 April 2024 diff hist −168 List of metropolitan areas in Georgia (U.S. state) Updated lede and source. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:5616:56, 20 April 2024 diff hist +6 List of metropolitan areas in Georgia (U.S. state) Both headings should say "estimates." Only the old 2020 figures are the formal census. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:4515:45, 20 April 2024 diff hist +24 United States The common term is better (piped for WP article). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 April 2024
- 20:3620:36, 17 April 2024 diff hist +42 El Paso, Texas Mention largest Hispanic city, San Antonio, as El Paso is ranked 2nd. Hyphenate temporary compound before noun per WP style. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:5015:50, 17 April 2024 diff hist −9 Languages of the United States Undid revision 1219277818 by OutofaNutshell (talk) --Revert. Must match article United States. Needs RfC discussion there to revise. Tags: Undo Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15 April 2024
- 23:3223:32, 15 April 2024 diff hist −2 United States Typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:2523:25, 15 April 2024 diff hist +1 United States One period, not two (my typo) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 23:2223:22, 15 April 2024 diff hist +3 United States Restore. These two "See..." tips are commands, which are complete sentences in English. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:2319:23, 15 April 2024 diff hist −1 Languages of the United States →English (245 million speakers): Replace misleading word "monolingual" with "English-speaking households". Use ACS terms for ACS data: these are not monolingual people but households where all members speak only English at home. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:5917:59, 15 April 2024 diff hist −5 Languages of the United States →English (245 million speakers): "Monolingual" is fale. The ACS figure "245 million only" is total number of all-English-speaking households (i.e., every member of the householf speaks English together). It still includes many people who can speak other languages, even including their native language. Deleted. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 14:4914:49, 15 April 2024 diff hist −8 Mac Davis →Personal life and death: Delete unencyclopedic wording. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 April 2024
- 17:0917:09, 14 April 2024 diff hist +3 Aretha Franklin →Early life: Usage Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:0417:04, 14 April 2024 diff hist 0 John Travolta →Family: As below, they lived in Anthony, Florida, outside (not in) Ocala. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:5716:57, 14 April 2024 diff hist 0 John Travolta →Early life: US spelling Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:5516:55, 14 April 2024 diff hist +3 John Travolta →Early life: Required commas Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:1816:18, 14 April 2024 diff hist −1 Languages of the United States →Most common languages: Typo Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 16:1616:16, 14 April 2024 diff hist +14 Languages of the United States →Most common languages: "Monolingual" is misused here; 239 million U.S. residents speak only English at home, but they can't be labeled as "monolingual". Ex.: Sonia Sotomayor's bilingual family required English in the home (and would be counted as "English (only)" in the ACS survey). Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:5815:58, 14 April 2024 diff hist −48 Languages of the United States →Most common languages: Awkward and repetitive. Also, the ACS is a survey of all U.S. residents; "the people of the United States" is inaccurate. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
13 April 2024
- 15:3215:32, 13 April 2024 diff hist −7 United States →Population: Dateline "as of 2020" is no longer relevant. Next sentence better as a complete sentence. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12 April 2024
- 15:3315:33, 12 April 2024 diff hist −40 Osteopathy →Regulation and legal status: Syntax fix; acronym better on first mention ( in previous paragraph): dropped here Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 15:2415:24, 12 April 2024 diff hist −2 Osteopathy →Regulation and legal status: Syntax fix, replace weak verbs ("there is," "has"). Content unchanged. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
