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15:4515:45, 20 May 2024 diff hist −27‎ m Marconi Electronic Systems ‎ →‎History: tweak current Tag: Visual edit
10:4910:49, 20 May 2024 diff hist −31‎ m CAMM (missile family) ‎ →‎United Kingdom: trim Tag: Visual edit
10:4810:48, 20 May 2024 diff hist −209‎ CAMM (missile family) ‎ →‎British Army: Rmvd "In 2023, reports emerged suggesting that investment had begun towards acquiring additional launchers, a new medium range radar, as well as the potential procurement of CAMM-ER for Sky Sabre" because source is some random guy spouting theories on Twitter Tag: Visual edit

10:0510:05, 14 May 2024 diff hist −396‎ Unmanned underwater vehicle ‎ →‎Manta ray: Remove POV/promo-like language Tag: Visual edit
10:0110:01, 14 May 2024 diff hist −916‎ Northrop Grumman ‎ Undid last. Written like a news article, not an encyclopedia article (e.g. "bears a striking resemblance to its oceanic namesake"). " is intended to revolutionize intelligence gathering methods with its silent and stealthy operations" and "a testament to the technical advancements in UUV technology" are POV - written like Wikipedia is astounded at Northrop's prowess! And the source doesn't say it's subject TO electromagnetic radiation. current Tag: Undo

11:2711:27, 13 May 2024 diff hist +88‎ CAMM (missile family) ‎ +Excessive citations inline
11:2511:25, 13 May 2024 diff hist +38‎ CAMM (missile family) ‎ Excessive citations template
11:2111:21, 13 May 2024 diff hist −213‎ Spin (propaganda) ‎ →‎Examples of "spin doctors": "Campbell trusted various journalists such as Tony Bevins and Denis Murray, with whom he had a close relationship, to write stories about Blair in a positive light;" is wholly inappopriate without a reference. Don't know anything about the former, but Denis Murray was a major BBC correspondent who I don't feel it's fair to say but a positive spin on Blair-related events current Tag: Visual edit
09:4809:48, 13 May 2024 diff hist −240‎ Peter Mandelson ‎ →‎Peerage and return to Cabinet as Business Secretary: Some tidyup. Reduced number of headings (some for tiny paragraphs). Also not appropriate to define his post-government career according to the tenure of Labour leaders when he has no official role in these leaderships. current Tag: Visual edit
09:4109:41, 13 May 2024 diff hist −583‎ Queen Elizabeth-class aircraft carrier ‎ →‎Availability for service: Why include a table that is mostly empty - the editor who added this couldn't be bothered finding sources for the rest of the data? Tag: Visual edit
08:2808:28, 13 May 2024 diff hist +427‎ Talk:Queen Elizabeth-class aircraft carrier ‎ →‎Program criticism: Reply current Tag: Reply

18:1018:10, 9 May 2024 diff hist +957‎ McLaren MCL35 ‎ Undid last. I don't understand most of these changes and no edit summary to clarify. Doesn't feel like an improvement. Tag: Undo
18:0918:09, 9 May 2024 diff hist −99‎ Northern Ireland Region of Shopping Centres ‎ Deadlink current
08:4008:40, 9 May 2024 diff hist −9‎ Boeing Chinook (UK variants) ‎ →‎Operational history: toned this down a bit current Tag: Visual edit
08:3508:35, 9 May 2024 diff hist −42‎ Boeing Chinook (UK variants) ‎ Article far too messy with pictures alone, so integrating this quotebox into text
08:3208:32, 9 May 2024 diff hist −1,553‎ Boeing Chinook (UK variants) ‎ →‎Operational history: Remove repetition and some very stubby paragraphs (i.e. a sentence or two). The Mull of Kintyre crash better described well in one place than poorly in two places. Tag: Visual edit
08:2408:24, 9 May 2024 diff hist +63‎ Boeing Chinook (UK variants) ‎ →‎Chinnok ER: tidyup of a messy section Tag: Visual edit

21:0321:03, 26 April 2024 diff hist −283‎ UK Defence Journal ‎ Undid last - source used is also a bit of self-promotion by UKDJ current Tag: Undo

08:2708:27, 18 April 2024 diff hist −1,197‎ Talk:London Stock Exchange ‎ Revert. This is an article about the company, unaffiliated to the company. If you have an issue with the company, take it up with the company. current Tag: Manual revert