User contributions for Jezzda
A user with 88 edits. Account created on 13 September 2023.
6 May 2024
- 07:5407:54, 6 May 2024 diff hist +1,169 Logan Reserve, Queensland Updated census data and demographic information. Minor reformatting for consistency and minimisation of redundancy. Removed update request. current Tags: Visual edit: Switched Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
4 May 2024
- 05:4905:49, 4 May 2024 diff hist +560 City of Brisbane Very difficult to find a collated list of all LGA budgets, changed the sentence to facilitate citations. Added citations. current
- 05:1405:14, 4 May 2024 diff hist +3,217 User talk:Jezzda →Distances to places: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 04:2904:29, 4 May 2024 diff hist +279 User talk:Jezzda →Coordinates in Queensland: Reply Tag: Reply
3 May 2024
- 10:1310:13, 3 May 2024 diff hist +10 m Paddington, Queensland Distance
- 10:0810:08, 3 May 2024 diff hist +256 Petrie Terrace, Queensland Replaced 'Brisbane GPO' with 'Brisbane CBD' and modified all applicable distances. The CBD is usually used as a reference point across the country, this could be confusing to readers. See comparable examples in all other Australian cities - Strathfield, New South Wales, St Kilda, Victoria, Burswood, Western Australia. current
- 10:0610:06, 3 May 2024 diff hist +2 m Bardon, Queensland Distance
- 10:0110:01, 3 May 2024 diff hist 0 Paddington, Queensland Replaced 'Brisbane GPO' with 'Brisbane CBD' and modified all applicable distances. The CBD is usually used as a reference point across the country, this could be confusing to readers. See comparable examples in all other Australian cities - Strathfield, New South Wales, St Kilda, Victoria, Burswood, Western Australia.
- 09:5909:59, 3 May 2024 diff hist 0 Bowen Hills, Queensland Replaced 'Brisbane GPO' with 'Brisbane CBD' and modified all applicable distances. The CBD is usually used as a reference point across the country, this could be confusing to readers. See comparable examples in all other Australian cities - Strathfield, New South Wales, St Kilda, Victoria, Burswood, Western Australia. current
- 09:5809:58, 3 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Newstead, Queensland Updated missed distance current
- 09:5709:57, 3 May 2024 diff hist 0 Newstead, Queensland Replaced 'Brisbane GPO' with 'Brisbane CBD' and modified all applicable distances. The CBD is usually used as a reference point across the country, this could be confusing to readers. See comparable examples in all other Australian cities - Strathfield, New South Wales, St Kilda, Victoria, Burswood, Western Australia.
- 09:5409:54, 3 May 2024 diff hist 0 Bardon, Queensland Replaced 'Brisbane GPO' with 'Brisbane CBD', haven't changed distance as it depends on route taken and the current can still be accurate. The CBD is usually used as a reference point across the country, this could be confusing to readers. See comparable examples in all other Australian cities - Strathfield, New South Wales, St Kilda, Victoria, Burswood, Western Australia.
- 09:4709:47, 3 May 2024 diff hist +422 Rochedale South, Queensland Replaced 'Brisbane GPO' with 'Brisbane CBD' and modified all applicable distances, updated the citation. The CBD is usually used as a reference point, it seems a bit confusing to have GPO for any of the suburbs, particularly as it's currently a specific address to a vague coordinate. Now also consistent with using Logan CBD for comparative distance. See examples in all other Australian cities - Strathfield, New South Wales, St Kilda, Victoria, Burswood, Western Australia. current Tags: Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
- 09:3509:35, 3 May 2024 diff hist +230 Rochedale, Queensland Replaced 'Brisbane GPO' with 'Brisbane CBD' and modified all applicable distances, updated the citation. The CBD is usually used as a reference point, it seems a bit confusing to have GPO for any of the suburbs, particularly as it's currently a specific address to a vague coordinate. Brisbane never used to have GPO mentioned, I'm not sure when that changed. See examples in all other Australian cities - Strathfield, New South Wales, St Kilda, Victoria, Burswood, Western Australia.
- 09:1609:16, 3 May 2024 diff hist +170 m Rochedale, Queensland Sorry Kerry!! Ended up finding out in the process that there wasn't actually anything wrong with the coordinates, it was just in a different (decimal vs longitude/latitude) format. I live and learn. Adding citation to the coordinates.
- 08:3108:31, 3 May 2024 diff hist +166 Rochedale, Queensland Updated coordinates to the closest possible location to what was already provided, as officially accepted by the Australian Government.
- 08:1208:12, 3 May 2024 diff hist +296 Rochedale South, Queensland Added citation request, added conversion, changed sentence structure and added a second secondary school in the vicinity, for accuracy. Tags: Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
- 07:5807:58, 3 May 2024 diff hist +188 Rochedale, Queensland Unable to source citation requested after extensive digging, it seems very painful to find the information as Queensland Government zoning is broad and usually requires direct contact for specific areas. Additionally, the state governments mark areas 'of interest' on a larger scale and don't necessarily zone specific lots. Instead, I've changed the language and included a citation for Brisbane City Council, which does zone the land for reactional use.
- 07:4307:43, 3 May 2024 diff hist +75 Rochedale South, Queensland Replaced mention of a 'Thomas Roche' with 'Roche family' the citation provided only mentions 'Roche family' and not a Thomas, although some unofficial/personal blogs do mention him. If anyone finds reliable information, feel free to add it back in. Tags: Newcomer task Newcomer task: update
- 05:3705:37, 3 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Bart Mellish Grammar current
- 05:3505:35, 3 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Miles ministry Grammar current
- 05:3305:33, 3 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Miles ministry Grammar
- 05:3105:31, 3 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Paul de Jersey Although I prefer the other style, I've made 'governor' lowercase for consistency with the intro paragraph and in line with Wikipedia's style guidelines. current
- 05:3005:30, 3 May 2024 diff hist +535 Paul de Jersey Removed 'in office' to reduce intro sentence lengthiness and because 'served as' with mention of the position should suggest this to the reader already. Capitalised 'bar' as it is directly referring to an institution, the Bar Association of Queensland, and to avoid any potential confusion over its generic use. Modified some sentence structure/grammar. Added link to 'took silk' so the term can be explained. Added subject's age at particular dates of notable achievement.
- 05:2605:26, 3 May 2024 diff hist +1,425 Cancer Council Australia Added more information, reduced redundant citations, added a note and notes section. Updated the language of 'Junk Free June' section to reflect that the fundraiser was held 8 years ago and is no longer 'new' or current. Also modified the language used to sound more encyclopaedic rather than promotive.
- 04:4304:43, 3 May 2024 diff hist +210 m Cancer Council Australia Included updated/modern 'about us' CCA page
- 04:3904:39, 3 May 2024 diff hist +41 m Australian Cancer Society Included the applicable rcat current
- 04:2904:29, 3 May 2024 diff hist +38 N Australian Cancer Society Page created as redirect. Cancer Council Australia was founded as Australian Cancer Society in 1961. See https://www.cancer.org.au/about-us/about-cancer-council Tags: New redirect Uncategorized redirect
- 03:5503:55, 3 May 2024 diff hist +398 Third Palaszczuk ministry While I personally prefer the previous spelling, I've changed 're-shuffle' to 'reshuffle' for consistency in the article and with all provided citations. Also included mention of Palaszczuk referring to the reshuffle as a 'refresh', which was particularly notable in her statements to the press at the time. Changed sentence structure to avoid a wordy sentence after this inclusion. Clarified who alleged the Fentiman/D'Ath portfolio swap. current
- 03:2103:21, 3 May 2024 diff hist +18 m Second Palaszczuk ministry Updated tense and clarified who the governor was, as well as adding his name to justify the capitalisation. current
2 May 2024
- 12:2912:29, 2 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Legislative Assembly of Queensland Grammatical correction. current
- 12:2312:23, 2 May 2024 diff hist +290 Legislative Assembly of Queensland Added required citation.
- 12:0612:06, 2 May 2024 diff hist +974 Yvette D'Ath Added more details regarding the subject's current positions. Added citations.
- 11:4411:44, 2 May 2024 diff hist −4 m Yvette D'Ath Word removal. FORGOT TO DESCRIBE PREVIOUS CHANGE - my previous edit included adding an enclosed box for D'Ath's various positions, to avoid unnecessary clutter of the article. Dates were made accurate, reference to 'Queensland' removed from current title for accuracy (with internal link). Prevention of Domestic/Family Violence was split off for clarity as it's a separate albeit consecutively held office.
- 11:3911:39, 2 May 2024 diff hist +736 Yvette D'Ath Updated that the subject has since regained the previously held role.
- 11:1011:10, 2 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Annastacia Palaszczuk My personal preferences and the official usages aside, I've brushed up more on Wikipedia's standards for capitalisation and am reverting this as it would not apply in this context. current Tag: Undo
- 11:0111:01, 2 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Jeannette Young A single comma.
- 11:0011:00, 2 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Jeannette Young Minor grammatical edits for consistency and accuracy.
- 10:5310:53, 2 May 2024 diff hist +33 m Governor of Queensland Various minor grammatical edits
- 09:3709:37, 2 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Annastacia Palaszczuk 'Premier of Queensland' is a proper noun as a title, so the 'p' has been capitalised. Tag: Reverted
- 09:2809:28, 2 May 2024 diff hist +578 Annastacia Palaszczuk Added that Steven Miles succeeded Palaszcuk, with citations.
- 08:5308:53, 2 May 2024 diff hist +17 Shannon Fentiman I've removed 'of Queensland' from the Attorney-General title to accurately reflect the title of the office as it is in Queensland. This also provides consistency among other ministerial positions (as they also don't specify, but rather imply, the office is specific to Queensland). The Queensland-specific link remains on the text for any uncertain readers.
- 08:4808:48, 2 May 2024 diff hist −234 Shannon Fentiman Minister for Justice has remained combined with Attorney-General since April 2012. As the subject held the position after that date, I've combined the two for accuracy. Please see the official parliamentary record - https://documents.parliament.qld.gov.au/explore/parliamentaryrecord/sections/Part%202.3.pdf
- 08:4208:42, 2 May 2024 diff hist +105 m Jarrod Bleijie Added internal links. current
- 08:2908:29, 2 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Shannon Fentiman Fixed Minister of Justice predecessor not showing.
- 08:1108:11, 2 May 2024 diff hist +53 m Jarrod Bleijie Included party affiliation in intro text.
- 08:0608:06, 2 May 2024 diff hist +46 Tim Mulherin While the subject's party affiliation was noted already in a couple of places, I've added it to the introduction so readers can quickly find the information when briefly skimming. current
- 07:0607:06, 2 May 2024 diff hist +280 Yvette D'Ath Modified all inaccurate office terms to reflect official parliamentary records and the Queensland Government Gazette. Note that the Shadow (Attorney-General, Minister for Justice and Housing, Minister for Training and Disability Services) positions do not have clear date ranges on official records. As such, the standard of officeholders losing a previous title the day before gaining a new one has been applied as a default to correct those particular date ranges.
- 06:5006:50, 2 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Shannon Fentiman Modified all inaccurate office terms to reflect official parliamentary records and the Queensland Government Gazette.
- 05:4605:46, 2 May 2024 diff hist +28 m Shannon Fentiman Added an internal link to Queensland's state opposition for reader navigability.
- 05:4405:44, 2 May 2024 diff hist +872 Shannon Fentiman Corrected the premiers under which the subject served and is serving. Added spouse and children. Modified sentence structure in intro text and added the subject's other ministerial position. Removed an end date in the info box to clarify that Fentiman has not lost her current position since gaining it in 2023 - added in parentheses for readers that the subject's current role previous went by a different title.
- 05:0205:02, 2 May 2024 diff hist +37 m Steven Miles Added wiki links to names and places for improved reader navigation.
- 04:3704:37, 2 May 2024 diff hist +182 Yvette D'Ath Added image and caption of the subject. Added number of children and more details of alma mater to info box. Changed 'occupation' to 'profession' to more accurately reflect the position of a politician, as well as added more accurate job titles.
1 May 2024
- 14:5714:57, 1 May 2024 diff hist −3 m Mage: The Ascension As the date format on this article overwhelmingly used the international (non-US) standard, I've modified the outliers so ensure consistency. Also made an extremely minor grammatical change/restructuring.
- 13:4913:49, 1 May 2024 diff hist +492 User:Jezzda No edit summary current
- 10:2210:22, 1 May 2024 diff hist +120 Modernism Edited some language to be more neutral and encyclopaedic. Extensive minor grammatical edits to improve consistency.
- 08:3908:39, 1 May 2024 diff hist +640 User talk:Mujinga →Question from Jezzda (08:39, 1 May 2024): new section Tag: Mentorship module question
- 08:1108:11, 1 May 2024 diff hist +27 Scottish Conservatives Added clarification to the previously copied over text to make clear that the policy position isn't necessarily representative of the entire part in the UK but a position focused on by members in Scotland.
- 07:5707:57, 1 May 2024 diff hist +131 Scottish Conservatives Added text from Scottish Conservative Party and some minor structural/grammatical changes.
- 06:1006:10, 1 May 2024 diff hist +725 m List of guests at the state funeral of Elizabeth II Added dates and citation
- 05:5805:58, 1 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Rebecca Akufo-Addo Fixed capitalisation on section for style consistency and accuracy. current
- 05:5705:57, 1 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Rebecca Akufo-Addo Fixed capitalisation on title held for style consistency and accuracy.
- 05:5205:52, 1 May 2024 diff hist +10 m List of guests at the state funeral of Elizabeth II →Royalty: - To avoid potential confusion regarding added dates to royal title holders, I've instead added the prefix 'then-' to their name to clarify that they held the position at the time of the state funeral. I chose this as it may not be clear to an average viewer if a king, countess, or any other typically-hereditary title holder were to have a date range after their name. It could be misinterpreted as a period of life to death or misunderstood as most would expect it to be lifelong.
- 05:4505:45, 1 May 2024 diff hist +14 m List of guests at the state funeral of Elizabeth II →Tuvalu: Added date range.
- 05:4405:44, 1 May 2024 diff hist +13 m List of guests at the state funeral of Elizabeth II →The Bahamas
- 05:2705:27, 1 May 2024 diff hist +204 m List of guests at the state funeral of Elizabeth II →New Zealand: - Structural edits and added the names of the representatives in the image shown.
- 04:5904:59, 1 May 2024 diff hist −511 m List of guests at the state funeral of Elizabeth II →Australia: - Although Chris Waller was invited and intended to attend the state funeral, he had to cancel. As this list is of attendees/guests, I've removed him from the list. Minor structural edits made for consistency.
- 04:4004:40, 1 May 2024 diff hist +1 m List of guests at the state funeral of Elizabeth II Added an oxford comma.
- 04:4004:40, 1 May 2024 diff hist +162 m List of guests at the state funeral of Elizabeth II Included the names of each former British Prime Minister pictured for consistency.
- 04:3404:34, 1 May 2024 diff hist +35 m List of guests at the state funeral of Elizabeth II Minor errors for grammar, clarity, and accuracy.
- 04:2904:29, 1 May 2024 diff hist +1,430 List of guests at the state funeral of Elizabeth II Extensive (minor) editing for consistency and accuracy. Date ranges have been added to title holders who no longer hold the position, to make it clear to the reader that the style given or office noted was relevant at the time.
- 01:5201:52, 1 May 2024 diff hist +892 User talk:Mujinga →Question from Jezzda (01:52, 1 May 2024): new section Tag: Mentorship module question
30 April 2024
- 08:1908:19, 30 April 2024 diff hist +65 m Papua New Guinea Mostly minor grammatical edits. To avoid removing the text on Papua New Guinea being the 'only country to have been granted independence from Australia' due to the source that doesn't explicitly support that claim, and the potential for the language to be viewed as biased or misleading in some form, I've changed the language to more accurately reflect the source and official information.
- 07:5607:56, 30 April 2024 diff hist +128 Papua New Guinea →Australian Rule and independence: - I have heavily modified a paragraph under this section for the sake of accuracy. I've tried to retain the original editor's intentions but have removed a part suggesting 'Canberra' (the Australian Government) found the colonial administration 'embarrassing'. The source that was provided makes no mention of this and instead could suggest the opposite. I've also included a source for the Rio Tinto claim and modified the language to better reflect the source
