User contributions for Jcejhay
A user with 3,538 edits. Account created on 28 April 2013.
23 May 2024
- 15:1215:12, 23 May 2024 diff hist +8 Mabel Normand →Roscoe "Fatty" Arbuckle trials: Replaced non-neutral "best" with "most notable."
22 May 2024
- 16:0816:08, 22 May 2024 diff hist −12 Francine York →Career: Moved "showgirl" wikilink to term's first appearance and eliminated unnecessary second use of this problematic term. More appropriate section heading. Eliminated off-tone use of first name. current
- 14:3714:37, 22 May 2024 diff hist 0 Jo Wood Moved "charity" section so that the two entrepreneurial sections are sequential. current
- 14:3514:35, 22 May 2024 diff hist −79 Jo Wood Put all TV together and all writing together; style.
- 14:1614:16, 22 May 2024 diff hist −29 Jo Wood Put two memoirs together.
- 14:1114:11, 22 May 2024 diff hist −23 m Jo Wood →Alien Nation podcast: Italics in header as well (but lowercase for "podcast"). "Podcast Radio" is not a first name / last name, so took that out of reference.
- 14:0914:09, 22 May 2024 diff hist +19 Jo Wood →Alien Nation Podcast: "Close encounters" should not be presented as fact. Also gave the phrase a wikilink and the podcast title italics.
- 14:0714:07, 22 May 2024 diff hist −216 Jo Wood →Mrs. Paisley's Lashings: Section had too much detail; read like PR. (Also, the assertion that "all" food was grown in her garden was contradicted by "locally sourced where possible.")
- 14:0414:04, 22 May 2024 diff hist −4 m Jo Wood →Jo Wood Organics: No italics for brand name.
- 14:0414:04, 22 May 2024 diff hist −6 m Jo Wood →Family: Full name for someone with dedicated article.
- 14:0314:03, 22 May 2024 diff hist −5 m Jo Wood →Early life: Full name for someone with dedicated article.
- 14:0214:02, 22 May 2024 diff hist 0 Jo Wood →Early life: "Lady" belongs in the wikilinked text, otherwise it reads as off-tone language.
- 14:0014:00, 22 May 2024 diff hist −4 m Jo Wood →top: No reason to have brand name in italics.
21 May 2024
- 13:1613:16, 21 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Rose Macaulay →top: Full stop better than semicolon here: the two statements are not closely related.
18 May 2024
- 11:4611:46, 18 May 2024 diff hist +9 Lobster Thermidor →History: "Possibly" for an alternative that is only one of three, not the only alternative to the first. current
- 11:4411:44, 18 May 2024 diff hist +27 Lobster Thermidor →History: Subsidiary elements hingeing on something that is merely one theory of several must not be presented as established facts: they are merely components of that theory.
16 May 2024
- 23:1523:15, 16 May 2024 diff hist +2 Masculin Féminin →top: Replaced "girl" with "singer." current
- 23:1423:14, 16 May 2024 diff hist −186 Chantal Goya →top: Revised to get rid of inappropriate "girl." Wikilink for "girl group," the genre. Removed subjective "catchy" and "talented." Removed OR assessment of Marie-Rose character. current
15 May 2024
- 22:1922:19, 15 May 2024 diff hist +431 User talk:Sm5574 →More of the Monkees photo: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 21:3221:32, 15 May 2024 diff hist +523 User talk:Sm5574 →More of the Monkees photo: new section Tag: New topic
- 17:3817:38, 15 May 2024 diff hist −32 Hi-Fi Fo-Fum →top: Revisions now warrant removing "advertisement" template. (But should this article exist at all?)
- 17:3717:37, 15 May 2024 diff hist −216 Hi-Fi Fo-Fum Removed orphaned reference.
- 17:3617:36, 15 May 2024 diff hist −171 Hi-Fi Fo-Fum Removed "Awards" section, which contained one trivial award and nothing else relevant to the subhead. Moved non-award info up and removed confusing reference to a previously unmentioned location.
- 17:3217:32, 15 May 2024 diff hist −2 Hi-Fi Fo-Fum →top: Revised awkward and misleading "less than twenty years" (20 years is a long time!) and removed hypey "proficiency." Revised "is" to "was."
- 17:2617:26, 15 May 2024 diff hist +3 m Hi-Fi Fo-Fum →top: Grammar.
- 16:4516:45, 15 May 2024 diff hist −46 Hi-Fi Fo-Fum →top: OK, "St. Louisians" does seem like an error; but that whole sentence reflected the promotional tone, so I've pared it down and removed the issue.
- 16:4216:42, 15 May 2024 diff hist +5 Hi-Fi Fo-Fum Undid revision 1223983137 by Notty520 (talk) Most of those good-faith changes introduced rather than corrected errors. (But I will look into "St. Louisians" vs. "St. Louisans.") Note that "Wisconsium" is to be taken as intentional wordplay on the part of the sloganeer. Tag: Undo
- 16:2916:29, 15 May 2024 diff hist −713 The Monkees →Conflict with Kirshner: Wikipedia is not a place to gratuitously signal-boost debunked rumors.
- 16:2516:25, 15 May 2024 diff hist −41 The Monkees →Independence: Removed subjective term "amateurish"; replaced "cover art" with "cover photo," which seems to be what was at issue. Rewrote description to avoid word "composite," which seemed possibly not be the accurate term.
- 16:2016:20, 15 May 2024 diff hist +4 m The Monkees →Developing the music for their debut album: Wikilink for first mention of this album.
14 May 2024
- 21:3921:39, 14 May 2024 diff hist +31 Hi-Fi Fo-Fum Reads like corporate PR.
13 May 2024
- 19:1019:10, 13 May 2024 diff hist −13 Ring Lardner →Legacy: Removed peculiar appearance of subjective term "sufficiently." current
- 12:1212:12, 13 May 2024 diff hist −271 Bob Burns III →Beast Wishes: Removed off-tone testimonial language and excessive detail. current
- 12:0812:08, 13 May 2024 diff hist +2 Bob Burns III Correction of my previous edit (different AIP).
- 12:0712:07, 13 May 2024 diff hist +30 m Bob Burns III Fixed undefined initialism (and added wikilink).
- 12:0112:01, 13 May 2024 diff hist +19 Bob Burns III Moved Blaisdell content to its own section, as it did not belong under "Bob's Basement." Revised unsourced "best friends" language.
- 11:5811:58, 13 May 2024 diff hist −52 Bob Burns III →Bob's Basement: No need to mention secondary product with same Burns content.
- 11:5711:57, 13 May 2024 diff hist +2 Bob Burns III →Bob's Basement: Style, formatting.
- 11:5511:55, 13 May 2024 diff hist −368 Bob Burns III →Bob's Basement: Removed unsourced hearsay about living subject.
- 11:5411:54, 13 May 2024 diff hist −2 m Bob Burns III →Bob's Basement: Italics not appropriate for "informal name."
- 11:5311:53, 13 May 2024 diff hist +40 Bob Burns III →top: Article is weak on citations.
- 11:5211:52, 13 May 2024 diff hist −18 Bob Burns III →top: Removed "in movies," since the example given is not a movie. Removed "smaller," which was a comparative with no referent (and the example, in which he had a major role, again contradicts it).
- 11:5011:50, 13 May 2024 diff hist −3 Bob Burns III Replaced problematic "best known" with tone-compliant "notable."
12 May 2024
- 12:1012:10, 12 May 2024 diff hist −4 Diane Hildebrand →Biography: See previous edit: "wrote," not "composed." Removed stray comma. current
- 12:0812:08, 12 May 2024 diff hist −3 Diane Hildebrand →Biography: In the songwriting biz, "compose" is generally reserved for music, as opposed to lyrics. "Composing" should not be used indiscriminately as a substitute for "songwriting."
- 12:0612:06, 12 May 2024 diff hist +2 Diane Hildebrand →Biography: "Write." (The repeated use of "pen" for "write" is beginning to throw off the article's tone.)
- 12:0412:04, 12 May 2024 diff hist −13 Diane Hildebrand →Biography: Style.
- 12:0312:03, 12 May 2024 diff hist +1 Diane Hildebrand →top: "Best remembered for" is problematically unverifiable; replaced with "most notable for." Wikilink for Screen Gems.
- 11:4811:48, 12 May 2024 diff hist +9 Antic Hay →top: "Supposed" immorality (correcting misleading style that reports a subjective judgment in a manner that implicitly endorses it). current
- 11:4611:46, 12 May 2024 diff hist −58 Antic Hay →top: Removed non-neutral language. Ran short paragraph into preceding one.
- 00:3600:36, 12 May 2024 diff hist −5 Larry Storch →top: Replaced problematic "best known" with simply "known." current
- 00:3500:35, 12 May 2024 diff hist −3 Ed Asner →top: "Best remembered for" is problematically unverifiable; replaced with "most notable for." current
11 May 2024
- 12:1612:16, 11 May 2024 diff hist −9 Linda Smith →top: It is not clear whether LCS is considered "American" or "Canadian," so took nationality out. (See my revision to LCS article.) current
- 12:1512:15, 11 May 2024 diff hist −13 Linda Catlin Smith →top: Official bio says originally from U.S., so not clear she's "Canadian" per se. Also revised "out of" to "in." current
- 12:1412:14, 11 May 2024 diff hist +78 Linda Smith (musician) Disambig etc. current Tag: Disambiguation links added
10 May 2024
- 23:2323:23, 10 May 2024 diff hist −5 m The Ghost Busters →top: Removed "clear," which had an OR feel to it. current
- 18:2918:29, 10 May 2024 diff hist −10 The Ghost Busters →Episodes: Removed gratuitous, subjective "beautiful." (But stetted similar content in ep. 8, where supposed "ugly[ness]" and "beauty" are integral to the premise.)
- 13:1313:13, 10 May 2024 diff hist +16 m Melody (1971 film) →top: Clarified who "Parker" is on first mention. current
- 12:3712:37, 10 May 2024 diff hist −35 The Ghost Busters Moved name info to better place.
- 12:3212:32, 10 May 2024 diff hist −274 The Ghost Busters →Production: Moved superscript to better place and removed unnecessary text about debunked rumor.
- 12:2812:28, 10 May 2024 diff hist +1 The Ghost Busters →Premise: Style.
- 12:1612:16, 10 May 2024 diff hist +33 The Ghost Busters →top: CN for presumed homages.
30 April 2024
- 23:4023:40, 30 April 2024 diff hist −30 m The Vegetable, or From President to Postman →top: Removed tautological clause. current
- 12:1712:17, 30 April 2024 diff hist +25 Colorblind James Experience Tone template. current
- 12:1412:14, 30 April 2024 diff hist −54 Colorblind James Experience →top: Removed details that were contradicted within the article. Moved wikilink to non-deleted mention of Rochester.
26 April 2024
- 23:3323:33, 26 April 2024 diff hist +4 m Sterling Holloway →Films and shorts: Italics.
- 21:3121:31, 26 April 2024 diff hist −2 Nudity in live performance →Theater: Replaced subjective term with more neutral one. current
25 April 2024
- 22:1122:11, 25 April 2024 diff hist +4 m Rogers Peet →top: Italics for film title. current
- 21:2821:28, 25 April 2024 diff hist +970 Roland Young Artwork. current
- 19:2519:25, 25 April 2024 diff hist +372 Talk:Aren't We All? →Unwarranted reverts: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 17:3517:35, 25 April 2024 diff hist +458 Talk:Aren't We All? →Unwarranted reverts: Reply Tag: Reply
- 11:0911:09, 25 April 2024 diff hist +1,327 Talk:Aren't We All? →Unwarranted reverts: new section Tag: New topic
24 April 2024
- 23:1023:10, 24 April 2024 diff hist −86 Aren't We All? Undid revision 1220627114 by Ssilvers (talk) This is not an edit war--yet. I will stop now, but you are the one who should go to the talk page (and, with all due respect, brush up on grammar and neutral tone). Tag: Reverted
- 23:0523:05, 24 April 2024 diff hist −2 Aren't We All? Undid revision 1220626314 by Ssilvers (talk)Reverted edit that made sentence a run-on and took away scare quotes for language that is not Wikipedia tone. Tags: Undo Reverted
- 22:4922:49, 24 April 2024 diff hist −48 Aren't We All? →top: Well, at least we have to get rid of the off-tone, non-neutral language: "thin," "Australian flirtation," "snare." (If these subjective terms come from a review they should be quotations with footnotes.) Scare quotes for now inappropriate term "shopgirls."
- 12:4112:41, 24 April 2024 diff hist +42 Aren't We All? Article is almost entirely lacking in citations.
- 12:4012:40, 24 April 2024 diff hist −413 Aren't We All? Removed opinionated OR summary.
23 April 2024
- 19:2519:25, 23 April 2024 diff hist +392 Where the Pavement Ends →top: Two endings. current
- 13:1113:11, 23 April 2024 diff hist −922 Don Barclay (actor) →Artist/Painter: Formatting, style. Removed trivial details. current
- 13:0713:07, 23 April 2024 diff hist +22 Don Barclay (actor) →Artist/Painter: CN.
- 13:0613:06, 23 April 2024 diff hist +7 Don Barclay (actor) →Career: Since his artistic career gets so much space, better to qualify this "career" section with the modifier "acting."
- 13:0613:06, 23 April 2024 diff hist −226 Don Barclay (actor) →Career: Revised for grammar and style. Removed speculation and unnecessary detail re. Poppins role. (Film has its own article.) Wikilink for voice work.
- 12:3212:32, 23 April 2024 diff hist −70 Don Barclay (actor) Moved Cary Grant paragraph to better place and revised it for better style and coherence.
- 12:2512:25, 23 April 2024 diff hist −2 m Don Barclay (actor) →top: Revised for more idiomatic language.
22 April 2024
- 22:4322:43, 22 April 2024 diff hist −1,304 Screaming Yellow Zonkers Went ahead and removed entire section: unsourced, hype-y, sometimes confusing. current
- 14:5414:54, 22 April 2024 diff hist +27 Screaming Yellow Zonkers Reads like corporate PR.
21 April 2024
- 00:4800:48, 21 April 2024 diff hist −15 Cass Daley Fixed problems with the article's structure.
20 April 2024
- 13:5513:55, 20 April 2024 diff hist −110 Waldo Frank →Biography: Moved marriage info to better place, as no direct relationship to literary career is mentioned. Removed unsourced assertion about art therapy; Naumburg has her own article. Removed incorrect comma. current
18 April 2024
- 17:3217:32, 18 April 2024 diff hist +38 Weldon Kees OR current
- 12:5512:55, 18 April 2024 diff hist +30 Snake →Internal organs: Queried vague assertion.
16 April 2024
- 23:1323:13, 16 April 2024 diff hist +46 Joseph Hergesheimer →Career: OR section. current
- 22:5322:53, 16 April 2024 diff hist −38 Too Busy to Work (1939 film) →top: Removed confusing reference to a "play of the same name." (This movie seems to have been based on the play ''The Torch-Bearers''.)
- 12:3212:32, 16 April 2024 diff hist +530 William Powell →Career: Broadway.
- 12:2412:24, 16 April 2024 diff hist −27 William Powell →Career: Per Wikipedia article about the film, Powell did not play Moriarty.
13 April 2024
- 17:2117:21, 13 April 2024 diff hist −9 American Spectator (literary magazine) →The Jewish Question: Removed non-neutral, pejorative adjective. current
