User contributions for Hifrommike65
A user with 7,348 edits. Account created on 11 August 2006.
27 May 2024
- 07:3007:30, 27 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Mary, Queen of Scots (1971 film) →Production notes: em dash, not hyphen in this usage. current
- 07:2707:27, 27 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Mary, Queen of Scots (1971 film) →Production notes: hyphen for usage
25 May 2024
- 13:2713:27, 25 May 2024 diff hist +150 English novel →20th century: Cleaned up section on Ishiguro & added Nobel Prize reference. current
- 13:2313:23, 25 May 2024 diff hist +30 m English novel →20th century: wiki linked film
- 13:2113:21, 25 May 2024 diff hist −38 m English novel →20th century: "distant future" suggests science fiction; I toned it down.
- 13:1913:19, 25 May 2024 diff hist −2 m English novel →20th century: gave Iris Murdoch her own two sentences.
- 13:1613:16, 25 May 2024 diff hist −1 m English novel →20th century: 2nd parenthesis deleted.
- 13:1413:14, 25 May 2024 diff hist +1 m English novel →20th century: pair of commas
- 13:1213:12, 25 May 2024 diff hist +4 m English novel →20th century: italics for title of book
- 13:0813:08, 25 May 2024 diff hist −3 m English novel →Victorian novel: wording
- 13:0713:07, 25 May 2024 diff hist −23 English novel →Victorian novel: inserted & wiki-linked the term "scientific romance," since Wells & Verne invented it.
- 13:0013:00, 25 May 2024 diff hist +32 m Victorian literature →Prose fiction: Added Wilkie Collins, since he was widely read at the time, & still has a readership. current
- 12:5512:55, 25 May 2024 diff hist −27 m Victorian literature →Prose fiction: Revised to emphasize Hardy's best-known novels.
- 12:5312:53, 25 May 2024 diff hist −55 m Victorian literature →Prose fiction: reworded for concision; cut "Romola" since it does not have the same critical regard as the others.
- 12:5012:50, 25 May 2024 diff hist −26 m Victorian literature →Prose fiction: condensed two sentences to avoid repetition of "notable."
- 12:4912:49, 25 May 2024 diff hist −7 m Victorian literature →Prose fiction: The Gothic Revival novels were also 19th-century, so mention here is Victorian period. Gothic capped.
- 12:4512:45, 25 May 2024 diff hist −34 m Victorian literature →Prose fiction: reworded for concision.
- 12:4212:42, 25 May 2024 diff hist −11 m Victorian literature →Prose fiction: reworded for concision.
- 12:3912:39, 25 May 2024 diff hist +84 Victorian literature →Drama: mention of Pinero, since his works have been revived & staged.
- 12:3412:34, 25 May 2024 diff hist −51 m Victorian literature →Poetry: reworded long, windy sentence for clarity & conciseness.
- 12:3212:32, 25 May 2024 diff hist −164 m Victorian literature →Poetry: No wiki links available; removed titles. Readers can check Landon wiki link.
- 12:3012:30, 25 May 2024 diff hist −72 m Victorian literature →Poetry: Adjusting changes
- 12:3012:30, 25 May 2024 diff hist −20 m Victorian literature →Poetry: Simplified wiki links to avoid extra periods.
- 12:2212:22, 25 May 2024 diff hist −61 Victorian literature Reworded & punctuated sentence for more clarity & focus.
- 03:4103:41, 25 May 2024 diff hist +221 Talk:Avram Davidson →"Fiction and articles" section: Reply current Tag: Reply
- 03:3803:38, 25 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Avram Davidson →Fiction and articles: corrected wiki link
- 03:3703:37, 25 May 2024 diff hist +238 Avram Davidson →Fiction and articles: Adding award-nominated novels, with a reference & wiki link for "speculative fiction."
24 May 2024
- 04:3504:35, 24 May 2024 diff hist +3 m Hell Ride →Production notes: Adjusted dating. current
- 04:3204:32, 24 May 2024 diff hist +13 m Larry Bishop →Filmography: Added TV credits to title
23 May 2024
- 11:5211:52, 23 May 2024 diff hist −3 m We're Not Gonna Take It (Twisted Sister song) →Covers: A "minor hit" is something that charts outside the top 40. I wiki linked Top 40 to indicate this. current
- 03:5303:53, 23 May 2024 diff hist +1 m J. R. Ackerley →Father's second family: adjusting punctuation
22 May 2024
- 21:5021:50, 22 May 2024 diff hist −45 m Mass media →Influence and sociology: Reworded & reduced length of sentences. current
- 21:4821:48, 22 May 2024 diff hist −50 m Mass media →Influence and sociology: Reduced wordiness.
- 21:4621:46, 22 May 2024 diff hist −23 m Mass media →Influence and sociology: eliminated passive voice when unneeded.
- 21:4421:44, 22 May 2024 diff hist −51 m Mass media →Influence and sociology: reworded for clarification.
- 21:4021:40, 22 May 2024 diff hist +5 m Mass media →Influence and sociology: em dashes inserted to pace a long sentence. Also used standard spelling for numbers between one & nine.
- 21:3821:38, 22 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Mass media →Influence and sociology: typo
- 21:3721:37, 22 May 2024 diff hist +3 m Mass media →Influence and sociology: Adjusted reference to a specific time (2012).
- 10:5510:55, 22 May 2024 diff hist +1 m The Manitou →Plot: space current
- 01:3301:33, 22 May 2024 diff hist −8 m The Ministry for the Future →Publication and reception: italics
- 01:3301:33, 22 May 2024 diff hist +280 The Ministry for the Future →Publication and reception: French award for novel.
21 May 2024
- 09:3809:38, 21 May 2024 diff hist +93 Henry Golding Adding "The Ministry of Ungentlemanly Ware" to the lead, since it was a high-profile performance by Golding.
- 09:3409:34, 21 May 2024 diff hist −8 m The Gentlemen (2019 film) →Plot: referring to a husband by last name & wife by first name is not balanced. current
- 08:2008:20, 21 May 2024 diff hist −4 m Al Green →Early success: wording
- 08:1908:19, 21 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Al Green →Early success: comma
- 08:1808:18, 21 May 2024 diff hist +3 m Al Green →Early success: spelling
20 May 2024
- 11:1211:12, 20 May 2024 diff hist −12 m The Phantom Freighter →Captivity: possessive (apostraphe) current
- 05:2905:29, 20 May 2024 diff hist −1 m George Payne (actor) →Career: no comma
- 03:0303:03, 20 May 2024 diff hist −4 m Shirley Jones Being a wife & mother is a full-time job. It is not "no profession."
18 May 2024
- 19:5319:53, 18 May 2024 diff hist −8 m PG: Psycho Goreman →Plot: wording. current
- 19:5019:50, 18 May 2024 diff hist −2 m PG: Psycho Goreman →Plot: wording.
- 19:4819:48, 18 May 2024 diff hist +5 m PG: Psycho Goreman →Plot: wording
- 19:0919:09, 18 May 2024 diff hist −27 m Anni-Frid Lyngstad →2005–present: Hiatus from music, selected public appearances and ABBA reunion: rewording for conciseness & clarity.
- 18:4518:45, 18 May 2024 diff hist +5 m Anni-Frid Lyngstad →1958–1969: Early work: wording a bit off.
- 04:4404:44, 18 May 2024 diff hist −2 m Oh Me Oh My (I'm a Fool for You Baby) No edit summary
- 04:4404:44, 18 May 2024 diff hist +23 m Oh Me Oh My (I'm a Fool for You Baby) Corrected title of song (with a comma, clearly shown in the photo of the single)
15 May 2024
- 18:3418:34, 15 May 2024 diff hist +16 m Summer in the City (song) awkward wording improved.
- 09:0309:03, 15 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Paul the Apostle comma inserted for ease of reading.
13 May 2024
- 08:0908:09, 13 May 2024 diff hist +3 m Kingdom of the Planet of the Apes →Post-production and visual effects: wording
- 01:2301:23, 13 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Billion Dollar Babies →Critical reception and influence: ellipsis is three dots current
- 01:2201:22, 13 May 2024 diff hist −5 m Billion Dollar Babies →Critical reception and influence: tweaked last line for clarity.
- 01:1501:15, 13 May 2024 diff hist −31 m Billion Dollar Babies →Recording and production: wordiness reduced.
- 01:1301:13, 13 May 2024 diff hist +8 m Billion Dollar Babies →Recording and production: added preposition to clarity meaning.
12 May 2024
- 08:0508:05, 12 May 2024 diff hist +2 m James Sallis →Short fiction: Quotation marks around story title. current
- 08:0208:02, 12 May 2024 diff hist 0 m James Sallis →Career and critical reception: colon sets up quote, not semicolon.
11 May 2024
- 07:4307:43, 11 May 2024 diff hist +1 m The Memoirs of a Survivor →Themes: Final quotation marks deleted, & inserted. current
- 07:4107:41, 11 May 2024 diff hist +45 m The Memoirs of a Survivor Noting 1975 first U.S. edition (I had it upon publication; New York Times review noted on this page was published in June 1975).
- 07:3307:33, 11 May 2024 diff hist +2 m Brewster McCloud →Reception: separate paragraph for review (all the others have a separate paragraph). current
10 May 2024
- 05:5205:52, 10 May 2024 diff hist +3 m Case of the Full Moon Murders "and" added. current
- 05:4805:48, 10 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Harry Reems →Filmography: Wiki link indicates the TV film titled Mae West was a 1982 film, not a 1975 film.
8 May 2024
- 21:3621:36, 8 May 2024 diff hist +12 m William Wordsworth →The Prospectus: italics for title; added "artist" for Blake.
- 21:3421:34, 8 May 2024 diff hist −9 m William Wordsworth →Later career: "however" unneeded.
- 21:3221:32, 8 May 2024 diff hist −21 m William Wordsworth →Autobiographical work and Poems, in Two Volumes: wordiness reduced
- 21:3021:30, 8 May 2024 diff hist +5 m William Wordsworth →Married life: "and" to end a series & a period to match format of earlier listings in heirs.
1 May 2024
- 11:2711:27, 1 May 2024 diff hist −5 m Arms and the Man →Plot summary: "both" is awkward & unclear here; I deleted the word. current
- 03:3903:39, 1 May 2024 diff hist +503 Talk:Avram Davidson →"Fiction and articles" section: new section Tag: New topic
24 April 2024
- 14:4814:48, 24 April 2024 diff hist −1 m Operation Postmaster →Aftermath: colon not needed.
- 14:4814:48, 24 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Operation Postmaster →Aftermath: two-word modifier takes a hyphen.
- 14:4714:47, 24 April 2024 diff hist −2 m Operation Postmaster →Aftermath: ellipsis not needed if the quote starts with a lower-case letter.
- 14:4614:46, 24 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Operation Postmaster →Mission: introductory element given a comma for ease of reading.
16 April 2024
- 17:3017:30, 16 April 2024 diff hist −3 m The Man Who Shot Liberty Valance →Production: ellipsis unneeded.
14 April 2024
- 09:1909:19, 14 April 2024 diff hist −14 m Quietism (philosophy) wording & punctuation cleaned up.
