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21:2721:27, 5 June 2024 diff hist +3‎ m Time Variance Authority ‎ Copy edit - adjusted a sentence in the lede. current Tag: Visual edit

00:1700:17, 3 June 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Musidora ‎ →‎Other works: “Relegate” is not quite the right word: it has elements of a kind of exile, a sending away “Confine” or “restrict” would be better – a sense of keeping in the same place. current Tag: Visual edit

12:1312:13, 29 May 2024 diff hist −3‎ m The Gentlemen (2024 TV series) ‎ Groundskeeper, an American term. In a British setting, the appropriate term for a man such as Geoffrey, portrayed patrolling the estate with a shotgun, is a gamekeeper. He calls himself a gamekeeper in episode 8.

14:1914:19, 21 May 2024 diff hist +6‎ m Criticism of Muhammad ‎ →‎Psychological and medical condition: Resolved the singular and plural clash of “those who suffered” and “was … a wretch”. Also the poor English that “perception” was a “wretch”. Tag: Visual edit
12:5812:58, 21 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ m Muhammad ‎ →‎Invasion of Khaybar: The correct English phrase is "that very night" and not "the very night", a phrase that makes no sense. Tag: Visual edit

18:1518:15, 20 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ m Hagarism ‎ →‎Methodology: You 'give' or 'provide' an account, rather than 'tell' an account. Tag: Visual edit

01:2501:25, 30 April 2024 diff hist −3‎ m Paulie Gualtieri ‎ →‎Season 4: Copy edit. "Restores" is a more suitable verb than "rejuvenates". current Tag: Visual edit

22:0422:04, 21 April 2024 diff hist −1‎ m 3 Body Problem (TV series) ‎ →‎Episodes: Copy edit. 'Get' is a poor verb to use here.

18:4918:49, 17 April 2024 diff hist −6‎ m Prion ‎ →‎History: Copy edit. 'Go' is unnecessary in this sentence. Colloquial rather than encyclopaedic English. Tag: Visual edit
04:2904:29, 17 April 2024 diff hist +4‎ m Margaret Howe Lovatt ‎ →‎Personal life: Copy edit. Change to correct tense. current