User contributions for De wiseOG
A user with 11 edits. Account created on 15 April 2024.
22 April 2024
- 20:2920:29, 22 April 2024 diff hist +492 m Music of West Africa I emphasized the transformation of women's roles in West African music, their contributions to cultural preservation and empowerment, and the influence of notable figures like Sona Jobarteh and Tata Dindin Jobarteh, while also highlighting the broader societal changes shaping musical expression in the region. Tag: Visual edit
16 April 2024
- 04:3104:31, 16 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Boston Modern Orchestra Project In the first sentence of the third paragraph, I added the word 'is, which is a linking verb that connects the subject with its description. I also added commas in places where they were missing and removed them where they were not supposed to be. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 04:2104:21, 16 April 2024 diff hist −3 m Farm Builders Before editing, I realised 'which', a relative pronoun, was used in a lot of sections of the article, which was providing additional information instead of providing essential information. To correct this, I replaced 'which' with 'that' to connect the phrases by providing essential information Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 04:0904:09, 16 April 2024 diff hist +86 m Siye Abraha I had to add commas where they were missing and remove commas where they were not supposed to be. I then rewrote the way the dates were written; for example, at the beginning of the article, it was written 12 June , 1955. I rewrote it for June 12, 1955. I also added and removed conjuctions at some sections of the article to add more clarity to the article. Tags: Reverted nowiki added Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 03:5403:54, 16 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Gabu, Nigeria In the first sentence of the article talking about coordinates, I replaced the comma with 'and' that was used in between the two coordinates being stated. I then removed commas in places where they did not fit and put commas that were missing in various sentences. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 03:3903:39, 16 April 2024 diff hist +1 m SBK Live I simply added missing commas and removed commas where they were missing Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 03:3503:35, 16 April 2024 diff hist −12 m Tourism in Metro Manila I added commas where they were missing and removed commas where they were not supposed to be. I also added other words and conjuctions like 'add' where they were missing. I replaced comma with a semicolon on a section to join the independent clauses and enhance clarity Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 03:2003:20, 16 April 2024 diff hist −5 St Pius X College, Magherafelt I added commas where they were missing and removed commas where they were not supposed to be. I also replaced relative pronouns like which (provides additional information) with that (provides essential information) for clarity. I also added dots to the initials that did not have any. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 02:5602:56, 16 April 2024 diff hist +21 m Ciudad de las Ideas (conference) I added commas where they were missing and removed commas where they were not supposed to be . I substituted prepositions to emphasize a certain point being discussed in the sentence. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 02:4902:49, 16 April 2024 diff hist +5 m Reñaca beach The change made in the sentence was the preposition used to describe the relationship between Reñaca and Viña del Mar. In the original sentence, "of" was used, whereas in the edited version, "in" was substituted. This alteration provides a clearer indication that Reñaca is situated within the boundaries or jurisdiction of Viña del Mar, emphasizing its location within the neighboring city rather than merely being adjacent to it. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
- 02:4402:44, 16 April 2024 diff hist +4 m Stagecoach Performing Arts I added commas to where they were missing and removed commas where they were not supposed to be. I also added other words and conjuctions like 'add' where they were missing. Tags: Reverted Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit
