User contributions for Csw99
A user with 137 edits. Account created on 27 March 2024.
1 May 2024
- 09:3509:35, 1 May 2024 diff hist −22 Kyle MacLachlan →Personal life: not encyclopaedic current
- 09:3409:34, 1 May 2024 diff hist −85 Helen Sharman removed pointless repetitions and poor writing current
- 09:3109:31, 1 May 2024 diff hist −7,482 Monocle →Wearers: tone, and removed list of trivia that is simply not of any value
- 09:2809:28, 1 May 2024 diff hist −268 Monocle →Styles: removed some opinions
- 09:2509:25, 1 May 2024 diff hist −236 Manos Limpias whole article is in a very poor state. cleaned up a tiny bit
- 09:1809:18, 1 May 2024 diff hist −95 Musandam Peninsula →Climate, geology and geography
- 09:1709:17, 1 May 2024 diff hist −641 Ras ben Sakka vague and off topic. State what is true, not what is not current
- 09:1309:13, 1 May 2024 diff hist −73 The Next Doctor →Writing: improved awful writing current
- 09:1109:11, 1 May 2024 diff hist −1,488 The Next Doctor →Writing: this paragraph is also not comprehensible
- 09:1009:10, 1 May 2024 diff hist −346 The Next Doctor →Writing: removed bizarre paragraph
- 09:0709:07, 1 May 2024 diff hist −35 Moldoveanu Peak clarity and relevance current
- 09:0609:06, 1 May 2024 diff hist −761 Moldoveanu Peak →Gallery: not useful
- 09:0609:06, 1 May 2024 diff hist −709 Moldoveanu Peak →Ascent: removed unencyclopaedic text cited to user-generated content
- 09:0209:02, 1 May 2024 diff hist −7 XO-1 style current
- 08:5908:59, 1 May 2024 diff hist −21 m Laurent-Désiré Kabila linked already in the same sentence.
- 08:5808:58, 1 May 2024 diff hist −3 Laurent-Désiré Kabila improved dreadful writing
- 08:5708:57, 1 May 2024 diff hist −70 Wyatt Cenac →Career: "revealed" is such cringy writing. removed badly-written trivia as well
- 08:5208:52, 1 May 2024 diff hist −515 Edgar Wright →Early life and education: removed valueless crap
20 April 2024
- 09:1709:17, 20 April 2024 diff hist −8 m Albedo →Illumination current
- 09:1309:13, 20 April 2024 diff hist −44 The Wombles →Background: totally unnecessary current
- 09:1209:12, 20 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Heilongjiang →Etymology
- 09:1209:12, 20 April 2024 diff hist −162 Heilongjiang →Etymology: cut inaccurate waffling. Heilongjiang does not derive from the English, obviously.
- 09:1009:10, 20 April 2024 diff hist −46 Heilongjiang removed statement of obvious
- 09:0909:09, 20 April 2024 diff hist −92 List of countries by past and projected future population →Preliminary notes: removed unnecessary bold face and instructions current
- 09:0709:07, 20 April 2024 diff hist −7 Levenshtein distance →Iterative with full matrix: removed "note"
- 09:0609:06, 20 April 2024 diff hist −32 Levenshtein distance tone
- 09:0509:05, 20 April 2024 diff hist −8 International Criminal Court →Trial history to date: redundant
- 09:0509:05, 20 April 2024 diff hist −494 William Tubman →Assessment of President Tubman: fixed appalling grammar, removed some bland statements of the obvious
- 09:0109:01, 20 April 2024 diff hist −31 John Marshall (Royal Navy officer, born 1748) →Biography: fixed poor grammar, removed weird repetitions current
- 08:5908:59, 20 April 2024 diff hist −11 Ancient Magnesia redundant current
- 08:5808:58, 20 April 2024 diff hist −1,388 Oman →Etymology: removed unintelligible text
- 08:5508:55, 20 April 2024 diff hist −17 Names of Sri Lanka →From 9th century to 15th century CE : Sailan, Saylan, Silan, Seilan: fixed more substandard writing
- 08:5408:54, 20 April 2024 diff hist −893 Names of Sri Lanka →Nickname/Special names: poorly written and not useful
- 08:5408:54, 20 April 2024 diff hist −6 m Names of Sri Lanka →Lakdiva
- 08:5308:53, 20 April 2024 diff hist −2,534 Names of Sri Lanka →From the 16th century : Ceilão, Lanka ; Zeylan, Ceylon: fixed more dreadful writing, removed a claim of "recent" studies which smacks of POV
- 08:4808:48, 20 April 2024 diff hist −512 Names of Sri Lanka →From 6th century BCe to 9th century CE : Silam, Sihala, Sailan: this was a horrific mess of poor English verging on nonsense and bad formatting as well
- 08:3808:38, 20 April 2024 diff hist −4 m Names of Sri Lanka →Before 6th century BC : Taprobana, Tamraparni
- 08:3708:37, 20 April 2024 diff hist +14 Names of Sri Lanka accuracy
- 08:3708:37, 20 April 2024 diff hist −1,136 Names of Sri Lanka restored lead from before it was butchered in Special:Diff/1182608624
- 08:1308:13, 20 April 2024 diff hist +16 MSNBC →Liberal bias: a much better source than Britannica should be used
- 08:1208:12, 20 April 2024 diff hist −49 MSNBC Undid revision 1219620756 by Zaathras (talk) the only reason to reproduce a quote verbatim is if the words themselves are the important thing. a quote from a competing encyclopaedia does not fulfil that requirement Tag: Undo
18 April 2024
- 08:2608:26, 18 April 2024 diff hist −182 Panama Canal Zone the whole section should probably be deleted. it can at least have a non-ridiculous heading.
- 08:2308:23, 18 April 2024 diff hist −28 Warren G. Harding the text badly overstated the reality
- 08:2208:22, 18 April 2024 diff hist +246 Warren G. Harding Undid revision 1217607731 by AlsoWukai (talk) introduced grammar errors and generally harmed the quality Tag: Undo
- 08:1808:18, 18 April 2024 diff hist −12 m Impact of culture on aviation safety →Tenerife airport disaster: why would anyone have put those in bold? current
- 08:1708:17, 18 April 2024 diff hist −10 Christina Grimmie →Murder: redundant
- 08:1708:17, 18 April 2024 diff hist −177 Laurent Fignon →1989: losing by 8 seconds: removed ungrammatical and non-neutral text, and an irrelevant hypothetical
- 08:1408:14, 18 April 2024 diff hist −13 Pedro Delgado →Delgado and the Tour de France: tour de france is not italicised, and section headings should not refer redundantly to the subject of the article current
- 08:1308:13, 18 April 2024 diff hist −851 Pedro Delgado →Delgado and the Tour de France: fixed a lot of really poor and extremely non-neutral writing
- 08:0308:03, 18 April 2024 diff hist −1,323 Pedro Delgado removed grossly substandard text and trivia from lead
- 07:5707:57, 18 April 2024 diff hist −49 MSNBC →Liberal bias: one does not need to name the source when reporting what it says, and one should not copy and paste directly from it either. Tag: Reverted
- 07:5507:55, 18 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Die Hard →Re-write: fixed absolute grammatical howler
- 07:5407:54, 18 April 2024 diff hist −224 John Nemechek cut some uncited claims and some vague and not very encyclopaedic writing
- 07:5107:51, 18 April 2024 diff hist −26 Chloe Fineman →Early life: removed totally unnecessary acronym
- 07:5007:50, 18 April 2024 diff hist −16 Chloe Fineman improved writing
- 07:4707:47, 18 April 2024 diff hist −85 Moons of Uranus irrelevant hypothetical
- 07:4607:46, 18 April 2024 diff hist −2 Uranus →Name: made less stilted
- 07:4207:42, 18 April 2024 diff hist −5 m Uranus →Name: why conceal his name?
- 07:4107:41, 18 April 2024 diff hist −188 Uranus →Name: Wikipedia is not a dictionary
15 April 2024
- 07:5607:56, 15 April 2024 diff hist −102 Léon (Swedish singer) removed ridiculous text, added three years ago but apparently nobody realised it was nonsense in all that time
- 07:5207:52, 15 April 2024 diff hist −27 Hillsborough disaster Wikipedia posts →Hillsborough disaster: the timing is not relevant current
- 07:5107:51, 15 April 2024 diff hist −316 Hillsborough disaster Wikipedia posts horribly written first sentence seems to be purely intended to shoehorn the article title into the lead. this is not necessary and the sentence adds nothing that is not already covered