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18 May 2024
- 07:5107:51, 18 May 2024 diff hist +1 Bell test ce: word choice current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:0404:04, 18 May 2024 diff hist +8 Bell test ce: word choice Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:1203:12, 18 May 2024 diff hist +3 Bell test clarify: the word “results” was already used in negated form, so a second, non-negated usage, intended as also negated, is too confusing. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 May 2024
- 04:3704:37, 17 May 2024 diff hist +6 Future of an expanding universe →The Stelliferous Era: ce: word choice current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16 May 2024
- 20:3120:31, 16 May 2024 diff hist −25 Iron-56 →Relationship to nickel-62: ce: awkward preposition chain and WP:PLA, fix by removing unnecessary pipe text current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:0120:01, 16 May 2024 diff hist +27 GW170817 →Gravitational wave detection: Further clarify 100s/1000s disparity; the latter is only discerned with hindsight current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 10:2610:26, 16 May 2024 diff hist 0 Keyboard expression →Pressure sensitivity or aftertouch: 1.) hyphen is not dash 2.) MOS:EMDASH opted elsewhere in this article current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:3606:36, 16 May 2024 diff hist −45 Adam Rippon WP:PLA remove redirect pipe text, rm unsourced “world feed” (still needs further clarification) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 06:2906:29, 16 May 2024 diff hist −1 Stars on Mars →Format: ce: word choice - definite → indefinite article Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:2405:24, 16 May 2024 diff hist −4 Kurzweil Music Systems →Artis/Forte Series: WP:REDNO - not notable current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:2305:23, 16 May 2024 diff hist −4 Kurzweil Music Systems →MIDIboard: WP:REDNO - not notable Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:1705:17, 16 May 2024 diff hist −89 Kurzweil Music Systems Remove ‘issues’ tag - resolved - citations problem from talk page was resolved 7 years ago in 2016 when the ‘Kurzweil’ users section was deleted entirely Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:1005:10, 16 May 2024 diff hist −23 Kurzweil Music Systems →K2xxx synthesizers: WP:REDNO not notable, WP:NOTADVERT Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:2304:23, 16 May 2024 diff hist −11 SpaceX →2001–2004: Founding: copyedit, rm MOS:COMMA (not needed) Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 May 2024
- 03:4003:40, 14 May 2024 diff hist +1 Lyle Mays →Biography: MOS:COMMA serial current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
10 May 2024
- 18:1318:13, 10 May 2024 diff hist −323 Stars on Mars →Format: factual fix: 1.) the ‘Parade’ cite does not discuss details of the elimination/immunity process 2.) the “Base Commander” is always eligible for elimination Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:3305:33, 10 May 2024 diff hist −19 Adam Rippon ce: fix grammar, simplify Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:4302:43, 10 May 2024 diff hist +15 Stars on Mars add end date for finished series Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:0402:04, 10 May 2024 diff hist −4 Carrie Fisher MOS:EMDASH - should not be surrounded by spaces Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
8 May 2024
- 20:2120:21, 8 May 2024 diff hist +17 SpaceX →Launch vehicles: MOS:CURRENT dating of ostensibly expiring future plans Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:5907:59, 8 May 2024 diff hist +10 Kurzweil Music Systems →Artis/Forte Series: ce: unwrap abbreviation Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 07:5507:55, 8 May 2024 diff hist +37 Kurzweil Music Systems →K2xxx synthesizers: fix: MOS:CURRENT tense, grammar, encyclopedic style/clarity Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
3 May 2024
- 23:1223:12, 3 May 2024 diff hist −24 Michel Petrucciani →Personality and musical style: ce: fluff current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:4520:45, 3 May 2024 diff hist +9 GW170817 fix: "100s" duration is inconsistent with later cited figure (1000s); probably refers only to human-audible frequency range
- 20:3520:35, 3 May 2024 diff hist −29 GW170817 →Gravitational wave detection: ce: clause sequential order, encyclopedic style
- 20:1120:11, 3 May 2024 diff hist +467 Talk:Swing time →Proposed split/move?: Reply current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
- 20:0220:02, 3 May 2024 diff hist +350 Talk:Swing time →Proposed split/move?: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Reply
- 19:5019:50, 3 May 2024 diff hist 0 SpaceX →2001–2004: Founding: punct before ref. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:5904:59, 3 May 2024 diff hist +4 Charles Simonyi MOS:CURRENT use template Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:5004:50, 3 May 2024 diff hist +4 Nancy Grace Roman Space Telescope MOS:CURRENT - use template Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:3503:35, 3 May 2024 diff hist +201 Talk:Wide shot →A “long shot” is exactly the opposite of a “wide shot”, not the same thing: Reply current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit Disambiguation links added Reply
- 03:3003:30, 3 May 2024 diff hist +785 Talk:Wide shot →A “long shot” is exactly the opposite of a “wide shot”, not the same thing: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit New topic
- 03:1203:12, 3 May 2024 diff hist −35 Long take ce: simplify, reduce off-topic detail in the lede Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
2 May 2024
- 20:0620:06, 2 May 2024 diff hist +9 SpaceX MOS:CURRENT use template Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:0220:02, 2 May 2024 diff hist +6 Raising and lowering indices →Mathematical formulation: make hyphen non-breaking current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:5619:56, 2 May 2024 diff hist +6 Accidental (music) add wikilink letter ‘B’, MOS:UL: “relevant connection” current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:4719:47, 2 May 2024 diff hist 0 Accidental (music) MOS:EMDASH consistency; this article elsewhere opts for em- vs. en-dash Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:1019:10, 2 May 2024 diff hist +118 SpaceX →2001–2004: Founding: 1. already wikilinked in previous paragraph, 2. clarify Griffin declined the position, with cite Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:2901:29, 2 May 2024 diff hist +2 American Restoration →Season 7: MOS:ENDASH current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
1 May 2024
- 04:5504:55, 1 May 2024 diff hist +13 SpaceX ce: clarify manufacturer and operator Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:1104:11, 1 May 2024 diff hist +7 Swing Time fix circular definition current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:0802:08, 1 May 2024 diff hist +12 Bell's theorem →The Copenhagen Interpretation: ce: ungrammatical, fix gibberish Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
26 April 2024
- 03:5303:53, 26 April 2024 diff hist +47 NTFS links →Limitations: Add sub-section header
- 03:3903:39, 26 April 2024 diff hist −588 NTFS links 1.) significantly reorganize sections 2.) update outdated wikilink 3.) try to fetter out some hardlink vs. symlink vs. junction conflation/confusion
25 April 2024
- 08:4008:40, 25 April 2024 diff hist +34 NTFS links split the important (but slightly long) section into discussing the two distinct 'hazards' separately
23 April 2024
- 01:2301:23, 23 April 2024 diff hist −4 Tham Luang cave rescue →Team members: fix: wrong semantics for that word Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:1701:17, 23 April 2024 diff hist −11 Tham Luang cave rescue →Team members: ce: precise clarification from citation, because it doesn’t exactly say that nobody else could speak English Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:1201:12, 23 April 2024 diff hist −5 Tham Luang cave rescue →Team members: 1.) wasn’t a full “rescue party” at that point 2.) clarify from cite, there is no mention of celebration inside the cave Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 01:0201:02, 23 April 2024 diff hist −4 Tham Luang cave rescue →Team members: grammar: definite article not needed Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:5800:58, 23 April 2024 diff hist 0 Tham Luang cave rescue →Team members: do not conflate Thai nicknames with concepts from other cultures; the use of such names in Thailand is not the same as elsewhere Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:5300:53, 23 April 2024 diff hist +3 Tham Luang cave rescue →Team members: fix table row formatting for one cell Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 00:5100:51, 23 April 2024 diff hist −5 Nondominant seventh chord ce current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 April 2024
- 15:0115:01, 22 April 2024 diff hist +411 Nondominant seventh chord try to fix some gibberish in the second section
19 April 2024
- 21:5221:52, 19 April 2024 diff hist +47 Accidental (music) ce: clarify (diatonic) 'scale tones', not 'notes'
- 21:4421:44, 19 April 2024 diff hist −13 Accidental (music) fix: natural mark does deploy diatonic alteration
- 21:1621:16, 19 April 2024 diff hist +269 Tham Luang cave rescue Add "order rescued" column to table, with comprehensive citations
- 20:4620:46, 19 April 2024 diff hist +8 Hans Zimmer →2012–present: WP:PLA clarify pipe text of existing wikilink Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:4320:43, 19 April 2024 diff hist −4 Hans Zimmer →2012–present: MOS:EMDASH: should not be surrounded by spaces. Previous edit: reorganize and consolidate paragraphs for chronology Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:3920:39, 19 April 2024 diff hist −19 Hans Zimmer →2012–present Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:2920:29, 19 April 2024 diff hist +22 Scott Johnson (composer) →John Somebody and early work: add {{cn}} tag current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 20:2720:27, 19 April 2024 diff hist −15 Scott Johnson (composer) →Education and background: ce: awkward, already introduced Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 17:4417:44, 19 April 2024 diff hist −11 Vera C. Rubin Observatory →Name: ce, clarify, simplify, match tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
18 April 2024
- 18:2618:26, 18 April 2024 diff hist −43 Michel Petrucciani →With Charles Lloyd in New York: MOS:STREAMLINE, fluff Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 08:1208:12, 18 April 2024 diff hist +56 Nancy Grace Roman Space Telescope mention of orbit type seems important (and brief) enough for lede; the info isn’t included until deep in the prose body Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 05:2405:24, 18 April 2024 diff hist −2 Jacob Collier →Early life: MOS:EMDASH should not be surrounded by spaces Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 04:1004:10, 18 April 2024 diff hist +1 Kurzweil Music Systems →PCx Series: ce: tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:5803:58, 18 April 2024 diff hist 0 Transylvania University book heist →Background: MOS:EMDASH Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:5603:56, 18 April 2024 diff hist −14 American Animals ce: word choice current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 02:3802:38, 18 April 2024 diff hist +8 R-process →Nuclear physics: “three sites” does not include human-induced thermonuclear, listed in final paragraph of this section current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 April 2024
- 06:1206:12, 17 April 2024 diff hist +1 Kiruna porphyry add grammatical comma current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
14 April 2024
- 22:2822:28, 14 April 2024 diff hist +44 Kurzweil Music Systems →External links: update dead link - not sure if this is the right way to do so Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 22:1922:19, 14 April 2024 diff hist −8 Kurzweil Music Systems →K2xxx synthesizers: MOS:CURRENT Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12 April 2024
- 22:4322:43, 12 April 2024 diff hist +10 Sound on Sound →History: MOS:CURRENT current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit