User contributions for 64.223.97.117

16 May 2024

• 13:1813:18, 16 May 2024 diff hist +2‎ Atacama Desert ‎ →‎Setting: ~~ my best guess on what was intended

13 May 2024

• 20:2320:23, 13 May 2024 diff hist −2‎ Isabela Merced ‎ →‎Career: ~~ "major"? either you're quoting someone, or these are air-quotes -- implying you don't think her role was major. if you want to be mealy-mouthed, try "significant." or maybe be specific about where her name was on the credits. sheesh.

9 May 2024

• 01:5301:53, 9 May 2024 diff hist −3‎ Miller's Girl ‎ →‎Plot: ~~idiomatic English: "demands [person] [act]," not [to act]

4 May 2024

• 16:2716:27, 4 May 2024 diff hist +99‎ Black Jack ‎ ~~ no idea why there's no link to "blackjack" under 'Black Jack' Tag: Reverted

29 April 2024

• 01:0601:06, 29 April 2024 diff hist +2‎ Infinite Search ‎ ~~finishing tidying? current
• 01:0401:04, 29 April 2024 diff hist +10‎ Infinite Search ‎ ~~more tidying
• 01:0201:02, 29 April 2024 diff hist −20‎ Infinite Search ‎ ~~wording

13 April 2024

• 20:2320:23, 13 April 2024 diff hist +97‎ The Little Sister ‎ →‎Themes: ~~ clarification
• 20:1320:13, 13 April 2024 diff hist +351‎ The Lady in the Lake ‎ →‎Plot: ~~ started out by just fixing awkward syntax, but it kind of spiralled, if you know what I mean. whoo boy. the plot still confuses me, after at least 3 re-readings. Tag: Reverted

12 April 2024

• 22:4022:40, 12 April 2024 diff hist 0‎ Japan (band) ‎ →‎Final years: ~~ awkward wording
• 22:3622:36, 12 April 2024 diff hist +2‎ Japan (band) ‎ →‎Early years: ~~awkward syntax
• 22:3022:30, 12 April 2024 diff hist −8‎ New York Dolls ‎ →‎Legacy: ~~ they can't both become two of the most influential bands